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2/26/23, 4:30 PM
So excited about how this plays out, you have set up such a great story. I literally skipped the sex scene to find out what was happening with the plot

3/1/23, 2:03 PM
@[ImNotGoodAtUsernames](/user/show/10004981) Same here. I came quickly so that I had an excuse to see what's Blake up to. I'm going to go against the grain here--mostly because I'm all out of cum to give--but I'd like to see the cat succeed here, maybe at least partially. But the moment I come back to this story, I'm probably going to sing a whole different tune.
2/28/23, 3:34 AM
I hate to be the first one to comment. It very much needs more fleshing out. Why all of the sudden did they have lust in their eyes. Why did they fuck like that. Just there are so many holes and gaps to make the story. Not just hard to follow along with, but makes it just flat unenjoyable. “I’ve been keeping track on how many times you guys came. Kaito came 4 times, Kanoashi came 3 times. I came 7 times and the absolute slut is Austin who came 19 times in the past 3 hours” said Refias. I found that extremely jarring in an already jarring story. This isn't meant to tear down your art. I would like to see you improve on this same story expand, and grow.

Anonymous
2/28/23, 8:15 AM
@[HnT Boy](/user/show/87763) this is my first time writing a NSFW story so it would make sense that it sucks so bad. in the future, i might continuing or fixing this story

Martin
2/28/23, 5:22 PM
@Anonymous Don't get discouraged! You only get better with practice. And reading a lot of other stories. You might get inspired, too :)
2/28/23, 3:25 PM
So romantic and sweet, with a healthy respect for consent and communication, too. What a lovely story! :)
1/15/23, 7:27 AM
Talley sure is a devilish leprechaun! A sexy, playful, but definitely dangerous firebrand. Methinks wreckage is not simply a sexual metaphor in there… 😃

2/28/23, 2:44 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) Firebrand is such a good word for him, haha, I _definitely_ didn’t start using it in the next chapter I’m writing… yeah, he’s no one to fuck with, but it’s fun as hell when he fucks with you. Sexual wreckage is a “metaphor” (or a literal phrase) that’s going to come up more and more, I think. Guys this studly with dicks this big, leaving gaping holes and blissed-out bottoms? I think wreckage is a very good word for it.
2/28/23, 2:08 PM
Love the story
Thom
2/28/23, 11:58 AM
Ah yes, just in time for my monthly dose of cuteness overload. Thanks for uploading another part to this series. I loved it 😊
2/28/23, 11:58 AM
Why need brainwashing and mindcontrolling when just by turning up your charming level and being intimate, you can turn the other person's brain to mush?
2/28/23, 10:09 AM
I loved the combination of the exotic (partial cock tf complete with size change!) and the utterly mundane (hanging out with friends, trying to include your bf in activities, and particularly wondering whether they hate you oh god they definitely hate you don't they???). You pulled it off very well, as ever.
2/28/23, 5:51 AM
I really loved this story. It had so much potential to go super dark, but stayed very heartfelt. The threesome was hot as fuck and the relationship between delta and omega was so sweet.
2/28/23, 4:46 AM
Holy shit. :partying_face: