Recent Comments

10/4/25, 4:49 AM
Yes, once again, keep those chapters coming. I enjoy reading the story.
10/2/25, 9:44 PM
This is fun. Hopefully, Theo will transform into Jasper when Jasper (now Theo) cums in him.

10/3/25, 7:54 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thank you for reading! I'm a long time fan of your legendary work, so it means a lot
9/29/25, 10:08 PM
Neat idea, and quite hot. I'm a softie, so I hope Jasper comes back and he and Theo (and maybe new!Theo...?) get to be together. <3

10/3/25, 7:51 PM
@[Sobek](/user/show/10012408) Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed. I'm also a sucker for a happy ending ❤️
10/3/25, 3:33 PM
Once again: I like such romantic stuff. Please provide more, soon.
10/3/25, 2:14 PM
Lovely! Can't wait to read more!
10/3/25, 2:04 PM
Really cute! If I may give you a tip: Spread out the chapters a bit. Like, keep at least two or three days between each chapter. Each new chapter published will bring the series back to the top of the list. You can also use the "Do not publish before" field to set a publish date. Then the chapters can get approved and published at the exact rhythm you prefer.
9/30/25, 3:00 AM
You have Chapter 4 listed twice. I think the chapters made it feel a bit disjointed so maybe just remove them?

Jai
10/3/25, 12:42 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Good call! Love your work, thanks for the tip!

10/3/25, 12:22 PM
@[Jai](/user/show/692615) Thank you. I try to be supportive of others best I can.
10/3/25, 4:55 AM
I agree I am enjoying this story
9/22/25, 1:20 PM
Interest? Yes! Please continue.

Jai
10/3/25, 12:42 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) On it! :)
10/2/25, 10:47 PM
This is actually very cute. Good for a one-shot, but it would definitely be interesting to see a follow-up