Recent Comments

3/7/23, 4:19 AM
I will say this story shows the value of collaboration: the branching should go (1) in the direction of spiraling (of course resisting, but not too much) submission to pleasure and domination, or (2) toward victorious overcoming (and topping, dom-ing) of his now-slutty would-be dominant. But to do that in detail, the drain on the author would be high. But a group effort would be cool
2/20/23, 6:34 AM
Just what I'd hoped for, chastity for Damo and fun competition style games with the two subs. I wonder what uses will Damien put Stanley to, now that he's got him for a week? Definitely would love to see some foot action make a return, if that's what you'd have on mind. I'm still wondering what the overall deal is with Marcus, as I'm still on the side of liking him. Would we see him use his technique on someone, let's say, more deserving a punishment and sexual torment? Will he come clean with Stanley (and us) about whom he works for and why he does what he does? Another great chapter, and again with a major cliffhanger.

3/6/23, 11:27 PM
@[Jet313](/user/show/10009595) Glad you're enjoying it so far. I have the overall ending of the story formed in my timeline, so you'll get the answers to your questions, some sooner, some later. Such is life, ah?
2/20/23, 11:51 PM
I don't really like Damien.

3/6/23, 11:17 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Well tough cos i do :P
2/20/23, 11:00 PM
Man, I was sad that this story seemed to be over, and I'm so happy it's back with new updates now! 🤩

3/6/23, 11:15 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) I'm so happy you're enjoying it 😻
Anonymous
3/6/23, 8:59 PM
I'm guessing we'll see both options, but I *am* pretty excited to read about X having some more fun with a man in uniform.
3/6/23, 4:49 AM
Uggggggggggh he's gotta give in eventually, right?! But I say Option 2, he runs. More changes would be fun.

Anonymous
3/6/23, 8:55 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) He does -- it's a branched story. If you go back a chapter, you can click option 1 to see him give in instead.
2/24/23, 2:46 PM
I’m curious how this is a Cupid story when it reads as a straight mind control story. Mark is totally controlled, mind fucked to oblivion, and has no grasp on reality. Don’t get me wrong, this is a good spiral story. But as a romance, it makes me shudder.

3/6/23, 2:37 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I do think this one has a little bit of romance in it, not as romantic but as Alex being taken care of by his controller, opposed to being treated badly just for the sake of being mean or being sold off to stranger who has tendency to amputate or snuff him out.
3/6/23, 2:11 PM
Do we get to vote? Continue then…