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hypnoslut
3/10/23, 4:03 PM
I gotta go with option 1, if he’s lucky somebody else will walk in on them and more fun times will happen.
3/10/23, 3:37 PM
Wow. This a fantastic first chapter. I love both characters. I love Brook and all of the details about him. I love the narrator too, already. Will there be more? I really hope so.
3/10/23, 3:18 PM
This is a clever and surprising idea. 3 levels into the story now, and each decision involving the book that Xavier makes causes a split version of him but every change made by the book affects every other version of him. This is so novel and interesting and exciting. I love that it’s a choose your own adventure where I want to read every branch. Especially because they are so hot. I’m especially a fan of big dicks, so this level (3) in particular is really hot to me. Every one of the people that Xavier encountered all have big dicks and reading how he reacts to all of them is super hot. I’m excited for more and very curious how many levels you’ll do. Each one is more work if you keep up the pattern. It’s already an impressive amount of writing.
3/10/23, 9:11 AM
I gotta go with 1 here. Of the encounters he's had, demons are by far the best of the best. And there's always the chance if he hangs around too long, other incubi will come across them.
Sebastián Apollo
3/10/23, 6:55 AM
I have to concur with the other commenters, this was _really_ good! Not only in terms of representation (which was really great to see), but just in the writing and characterization of Brook and Carter and their banter. Brilliant work, great job!
3/10/23, 6:51 AM
Simply an amazing first chapter. Can’t wait for more!
3/10/23, 5:04 AM
He swallows that load and accepts his place!!
3/10/23, 3:51 AM
This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read here! I have to say it’s AMAZING to see representation from a group that almost never shows up on the site, and you manage to make that representation part of the story. Add the incredible descriptions, perfect pace of the masturbation scene, and the genuine love between the two guys, and you have a fantastic tale. Well done! :D
3/10/23, 1:00 AM
Excellent story, always love hair growth, especially facial hair. The pic was perfect and made him even hotter. Definitely needs to be continued. I would also suggest trying more length and a more detailed transformation.