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3/30/23, 1:48 PM
The intertwining approach of past and current is so fucked up but it works. Like talking about your childhood while having sex kind of fucked up, but it does justify(?) coach's thought process. And that he thought Luke would be his son in law... awww. One thing though, I did not expect Coach to be such a level-headed and coherent person. He's also a lot younger than I expect, in the way he speak (read: the way this chapter is written), but it also feel distinct from Luke's (read: previous chapters), which is drown in clueless-ness and lust. Might just be stereotyping, but when I think of coaches (or any father figure) the first thing that comes to mind is "incapablility of articulating thoughts in the way they think should be expressed". Maybe bc he's a single father? Or maybe he's just not a stereotype. Kinda refreshing, but also make me feel guilty of thinking of him that way.

3/30/23, 1:55 PM
@[CieL](/user/show/748750) Thanks for the comment! Yeah Coach is in his late 30s, so he’s not as old as people might think. My characterization of him is that’s he’s not a stoic man’s man, probably because of his daughters, but he’s also weary and beaten down from being a single dad. If you read my spin off Rookie Mistake you’ll get more insight into Coach. I wonder if I wrote him too young sounding, even though technically I am closer to his age than Luke’s.
3/30/23, 12:02 PM
Always great to see a new chapter. Things are really heating up now. Nice reveal that the fight was never really between the families having sex or not but rather abuse and care. It is a bit sad that the uptight religious values that Peter has been struggling to uphold does not seem to have any actual relevans with the powers "upstairs". I do wonder how kinky this love based sex is allowed to be. Is it monogami? Will Peters new online friends get to see them have sex on the webcam? Spying on him in the shower was use and abuse but if they both agree to it, then a webcam show might still be in the cards and could teach the other men about the difference between lust and love. Perhaps the guys have already gotten a show if Peter has already managed to put a camera up in Blakes room. I can't wait to read the conclusion.
3/30/23, 3:32 AM
Omfg man this is heating up to an amazing conclusion
3/11/23, 6:01 PM
Love this story so much, I've read it multiple times :) any chance we will see the next chapter before the 1-year mark of this chapter's release (April 21st)? Hope things in real life are going well!

3/30/23, 3:03 AM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Thanks for reading! I unfortunately lost my job a while back, so my writing has mostly been paid commissions lately. I still have the next chapter in drafts, but it's unlikely I'll finish it by April 21st. Fascinum chapter 4 will probably be my next GSS submission since it just needs some slight editing.
Anonymous
3/14/23, 5:26 AM
in addition to being hot, this is so so charming! i love superhero media, but don't always click with superhero themed porn? this, though, is absolutely perfect, ticks all my boxes. i know you're juggling a lot of plates (and i love all of them, so i won't be disappointed no matter what you put your energy into), but i will definitely be keeping my eye on this :-)

3/30/23, 2:59 AM
@Anonymous Thanks! Life threw me for a loop recently, so this story is low priority, but it's definitely still in the WIP pile. Fascinum will probably be my next installment.
Nutiper
3/29/23, 11:59 PM
Okay I know this is kinda a dumb thing to fixate on, but I love how you wrote Ig's jealousy of Brook at the start of the chapter. I feel like it's so easy to write jealousy in a way that feels ugly, or possessive. Instead, the way Ig gets jealous (and how he unknowingly reveals his actual tender feelings) makes him feel _more_ lovable. It makes us realize, too, that even with all the sexy smirking and babyboy-ing, he really _likes_ Carter. (And also it's just very very funny how terrible he is at hiding it. And how Mr. Ignacy himself fixates on Brook's _name_, of all things...) I feel like Ig and Carter had such fantastic sexual chemistry in the previous chapter that of course I couldn't help but want more of them. Like, wow! But I was still thinking of Brook and Carter as the "main couple" of the story... up until the opening of this chapter. You managed to get me rooting for a power _throuple_, all from the little jealousy scene alone.
3/29/23, 11:03 PM
I love this story SOOOO much. I really want it to just continue forever. My heart skips whenever I see another chapter posted. I’m going to be so sad when this comes to a conclusion but dear lord I love it. Excellent work all around!
Anonymous
3/29/23, 8:24 PM
The image looks like he shit on himself..

3/29/23, 10:04 PM
@Anonymous Yeah, it’s my bad, I’m a total amateur at digital art, but I wanna try and improve, and that mainly starts with tons of practice. I have yet to reach any moderate level to draw people or liquids for that matter.
3/29/23, 1:50 PM
It gets better EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER. Such a great story. Love the direction the cats ‘solution’ takes it.
Nutiper
3/29/23, 2:05 AM
For a while I've been sitting here trying to think of a way to explain what I like *so much* about this story. How there's a glow of "damn, this is so fun to *read*" down to the littlest detail. Brook calling Mr. Altamura the "Italian Stallion" and liking to neigh when he sees him through the window. Norm's face flexing like there's a bunch of wires behind it. The whole exchange of "Oh your name's Carter? You *look* like a Carter, wink wink" "Oh yeah, well what the hell is your name, buff security guard dude?!" "....Ignacy." I think the closest metaphor I've landed on is: it's like the prose is carbonated. "Sparkling erotica". Yeah, I know... SodaStream, eat your heart out! But hey, it makes the fingering-and-rimming scene between Ig and Carter incredibly fun to read, too. Somehow it ended up hotter and more intense than most of the actual sex scenes I've read on this site. Carbonation, in *my* smut? It's more likely than you think!