Recent Comments

Jack
3/17/23, 5:20 PM
Hey, Author! This story makes me cum so hard every time I read it. You have do keep going! I need to know if Jon and Theo end up as more than friends, or at least what it feels like to be railed by Jon's huge snake!
3/17/23, 5:01 PM
This is quickly becoming an all-time favorite series for me. The fantasy elements are interesting and fun, the sex is hot hot hot, the characters are charming, the pacing is fun and high-energy... so excited for more. Can't wait to see how these romps enrich Carter and Brooks' connection, and what kind of sexy nonsense these other sorcerers introduce!
3/17/23, 9:00 AM
Great sex scenes and all but I'm definitely here for the story. I want to know more about the cult, I want to know more about the characters, I kinda want to see Dom be a sub lol. Can't wait for chapter 3!
3/17/23, 5:25 AM
That was fun. Give the next guy a Punk Makeover for the bar.
3/16/23, 2:46 PM
Are we allowed to guess authors? Because I have some strong suspicions I know the author behind this tantalizing little tale.

3/16/23, 6:10 PM
@[Demivierge](/user/show/908122) Best not to state your guess publicly, I suppose, since it’s not in the spirit of the contest… More fun if it’s anonymous! But I’m charmed that people are speculating, haha. I did take inspiration from a few different authors for different branches, and some of the guesses so far have been flattering. I’m glad you’re finding it to be a tantalizing read!
Jim
3/16/23, 10:10 AM
Great story - thank you - option 1 please

3/16/23, 5:52 PM
@[Jim](/user/show/10026335) Thank you! And no worries, I finished writing both options last night. 😉 You'll get to read both! (I just need to write the continuations of the other three branches too — aka, Micah, the security guards, and the incubus — and then I'll post all five new chapters at once.)
3/16/23, 8:48 AM
I don't think I've read an Eldritch being manipulating reality so that humans can perceive them quite like this. Brilliant!

3/16/23, 5:50 PM
@[Zi19](/user/show/922060) Thank you! I had a lot of fun coming up with him... I'm glad you're enjoying it! 😁
Anonymous
3/15/23, 9:29 PM
Oh, to have a slut brand of myself, obvious to the world. This is such a great story and the still connected, ever expanding branches is a great narrative device. Great story! Brilliant! More!

3/16/23, 5:42 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! And who knows, maybe give Micah a visit... He might have a slut brand in store for you too. 😉
3/15/23, 8:15 PM
This is awesome to the n factorial (n!). Every time Xavier escapes with the notebook his slutty version splits off. And we all get to have our cake and eat it too. Genius!

3/16/23, 5:40 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Gosh, thank you for all your very kind comments, I really appreciate them! 😁 And you were one of the first to spot how the story works, too — I was really glad to see people catching onto it in the comments!
3/16/23, 5:57 AM
HOLY FUUUUCK! This was THEEE chapter. 100/10.

3/16/23, 5:30 PM
@[Thexshxboi](/user/show/910223) Hahaha I'm really glad you liked it! 😁 I had fun writing this one.