Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/18/23, 8:31 PM
And then along came Zeus! This story just keeps getting better and better, every branch adding its own twist on what it means to be a slut. I was hoping for breeding to show up and maybe some cum inflation to follow. After all, all that babybatter has to go somewhere! Looking forward to the author reveal too, I want to see if my hunch is correct. I have a guess on how the story might possibly end too but Im keeping that to myself.

3/20/23, 6:21 PM
@Anonymous I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far, haha! And I'm curious to know how you think the story might end, too — the final chapters are going up today, so let me know if your hunch ended up right... 👀

Anonymous
3/21/23, 10:50 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I was so very wrong! See anon in final chapter
3/21/23, 4:41 AM
I'm quite excited to see more of this when you have time! Your work so far as been *exquisite* and lovely and I live it.
Haruspex
3/21/23, 2:59 AM
If this story doesn't win the gold I'm going to personally dox every member of this site to give them a firm disapproving stare about their lack of taste. Holy shit, I have no idea how you managed to make a multi-chapter gay erotica story have a plot and characters that were actually compelling and genuinely engaging to read about. I mean, I do, because narrative structures and characterizations and blah blah theory formality bullshit, but still--it's noteworthy because it's a rarity. Win or not, I really can't wait til the end of this contest, man. I'm gonna be keeping my eyes peeled for your future work. Cheers!
3/21/23, 2:16 AM
What an absolute slam dunk. Hot, heartwarming, well-paced, believable reactions from the protagonists, and fun pulpy conflict. Can't wait for the next chapter, no matter when it comes. Thanks for sharing your work!
3/21/23, 12:51 AM
don't apologize for the wait for the next chapter! this is a very funny cliffhanger to hold at, I'm super excited to see where this goes!
3/21/23, 12:07 AM
Not enough hours in the day. (Blame Daylight Savings). Still a most fantastic story for so many reasons. Just love all the characters and the premise and everything. And you’re right, there are a lot of great stories in this challenge. I wish they all could win. Sigh.
3/21/23, 12:01 AM
I am sad to read about the delay in future chapters due to the rules of the contest. However, if it means we will get a more full and complete world, to match what you’ve already given to us, I’m more than happy to make that sacrifice.
3/20/23, 9:46 PM
Option 1

3/20/23, 11:17 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Lucky for you, you get *both* options! 😉
3/20/23, 10:57 PM
Ahh will the finale be out tonight? So hot

3/20/23, 11:16 PM
@[Dreamweavr](/user/show/883922) It will! I'm about to post it! 😊
offeringservice26
3/20/23, 11:15 PM
Can’t wait for more! And also can’t wait for the competition to end so I can find out who you are :)