Recent Comments

3/20/23, 11:51 PM
This story, from start to finish, has been an absolutely horny delight to read. Thank you so much, from all of us playing, and I hope you love the fial product as much as all of us do <3

3/22/23, 4:04 AM
@[HypnoticPrey](/user/show/506385) I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you for this really nice comment! I'm definitely very pleased to have finished it all in time. 😄
3/20/23, 11:41 PM
I was hoping he would pick Gerri. I'm a poor romantic monster fucker though

3/22/23, 3:57 AM
@[NiuhiBoi](/user/show/10002580) No worries there, Xavier is a monster fucker too now (some of the time). 😉 Thank you for commenting!
Anonymous
3/21/23, 5:06 PM
Well written, Delicate emotions. Jesse has been waiting William for many years, I really hope they can get an reunion chapter like the episode 3 of 'the last of us'. Curious if he's been detained
Anonymous
3/21/23, 4:03 PM
I love this story
3/21/23, 2:05 PM
Fun, fun chapter! I could have used some more erotic tension, if you can believe it. Something about narrating the logistics of their walk through campus and coming up with the plan distracted me from the libido of the scene, and it seemed like they were too coherent/sober for people under the influence of narcotics. You know me — I’m all about consistency of vibe in my storytelling. You’ve got me hooked though, and I will absolutely be plowing through the rest of this series in short order!
Anonymous
3/18/23, 8:31 PM
And then along came Zeus! This story just keeps getting better and better, every branch adding its own twist on what it means to be a slut. I was hoping for breeding to show up and maybe some cum inflation to follow. After all, all that babybatter has to go somewhere! Looking forward to the author reveal too, I want to see if my hunch is correct. I have a guess on how the story might possibly end too but Im keeping that to myself.

3/20/23, 6:21 PM
@Anonymous I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far, haha! And I'm curious to know how you think the story might end, too — the final chapters are going up today, so let me know if your hunch ended up right... 👀

Anonymous
3/21/23, 10:50 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I was so very wrong! See anon in final chapter
3/21/23, 4:41 AM
I'm quite excited to see more of this when you have time! Your work so far as been *exquisite* and lovely and I live it.
Haruspex
3/21/23, 2:59 AM
If this story doesn't win the gold I'm going to personally dox every member of this site to give them a firm disapproving stare about their lack of taste. Holy shit, I have no idea how you managed to make a multi-chapter gay erotica story have a plot and characters that were actually compelling and genuinely engaging to read about. I mean, I do, because narrative structures and characterizations and blah blah theory formality bullshit, but still--it's noteworthy because it's a rarity. Win or not, I really can't wait til the end of this contest, man. I'm gonna be keeping my eyes peeled for your future work. Cheers!
3/21/23, 2:16 AM
What an absolute slam dunk. Hot, heartwarming, well-paced, believable reactions from the protagonists, and fun pulpy conflict. Can't wait for the next chapter, no matter when it comes. Thanks for sharing your work!
3/21/23, 12:51 AM
don't apologize for the wait for the next chapter! this is a very funny cliffhanger to hold at, I'm super excited to see where this goes!