Recent Comments

Captain Nitpick
3/21/23, 12:16 PM
So very sweet! Ivan is one of my favorites in this little tale. But speaking of tails, didn't he just say only incublets have them? So how could he entwine his with Xavier's? Captain Nitpick strikes again!

3/22/23, 3:48 AM
@Captain Nitpick Oh no, it's Captain Nitpick! 😂 You're absolutely correct, this is totally a goof on my end. I was rushing with the last chapters! I'll avoid editing it for now since I want to wait until the contest is over. It doesn't feel sporting to do it during the judging period. But I'll fix it after. Thank you for spotting it!

3/23/23, 4:55 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Obviously Incubuses can manifest tails _whenever they want_. It's only the babies that have them out all the time, like a teenager who keeps getting boners. Of course whipping out your tail all willy-nilly is frowned upon. You need to save it for when the human you're preying on needs a little extra penetration or else you're making tail knots with your incubus boyfriend.

3/23/23, 7:02 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Oh gosh! 😂 I love this interpretation!
3/22/23, 2:49 PM
I want to open up a joint credit card! ROFL!🤣

3/23/23, 7:01 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) What can I say, Ivan the incubus has some pretty kinky fantasies... 😉
Mar 23, 2023
3/23/23, 5:33 PM
:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Really good start!
3/22/23, 2:02 PM
This story has been fantastic. I was actually relieved when I got to the end of this and read that it wasn’t the last chapter. I was worried that the whole thing would be extremely rushed to finish in time for the contest end. I eagerly await more. The sex in this is nice. I love the idea that Carter’s power made Brook’s dick shrink and grow to fuck him enough to get them both off. I also love their followers rejoicing every time they climax. And I love the stuff going on in the neighborhood outside. More temple building, and then the library nerds showing up to ruin everything. I did wonder how Ig was affected. Was he outside, waiting, jealous? Was he affected by Carter having sex and got off each time they did? Are Carter and Brook going to invite him to join them? Will they have time, with the barbarians at the gates?
3/22/23, 12:28 PM
Thanks for this wonderful addition. Love where you are taking this.
blue nut
3/21/23, 11:53 AM
But wait. If Auntie Woddin is Odin, then who is Gerri really?

3/22/23, 4:29 AM
@blue nut Good catch with Auntie Woddin. 👀 I know I wasn't being overly subtle about it, but still... My hint for Gerri is, if you google 'Odin' and 'Gerri' together, then Google *should* spit out the answer...

Blue nut
3/22/23, 8:38 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Damnit, I was so caught up with ravens and other gods that I just plum forgot about OG Geri! It was staring me in the face all along! Nice!
3/22/23, 12:34 AM
I'm gonna be honest I don't think anything on this site ever had a chance of topping this, the cleverness and the writing is on such a high level that I don't know how anybody could begin to compete

3/22/23, 5:13 AM
@[Tkhon](/user/show/40052) Wow! This is _very_ high praise, thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! 😊
3/21/23, 6:42 PM
Extremely hot story that got surprisingly cute at the very end—I’m glad that it went in the direction it did, I would’ve felt bad for Xavier if it ended any other way. But now I’m invested in this polycule, and I gotta ask if we could get some more stories about them in the future? (At the very least, I think Golbo’bog, Zeus, and Gerri deserve a bit more screentime with Xavier, considering how many chapters Micah, Tony, and Bruno got.) And if not about them specifically, I think the infinite building complex has infinite potential for more stories as well. Either way, I’m looking forward to more. P.S, Who is Auntie Woddin??????

3/22/23, 5:11 AM
@[Pyrico](/user/show/913694) Aw! I'm so charmed by this comment, thank you for writing it! I don't know if I have more stories in me about our dudes (or the building!) at the moment, though maybe there'll be more down the line... But this feels like such a huge compliment about the story, to be asked for more, so _thank_ you. (And as for Auntie Woddin, her name is very similar to a particular ancient god with only one eye...👀 In fact, their names are pronounced almost exactly the same... That's my clue!)
Anonymous
3/21/23, 10:48 AM
Wow wow wow wow. Wow. This did not end the way I thought it would and boy am I glad I was wrong. I thought Micah was going to end up with the brand in some sort of karmic revenge, but this is so much better! What a delightful little romp from beginning to end. Bravo!

3/22/23, 4:22 AM
@Anonymous I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I'm happy I could surprise you with the ending in a positive way! Thank you for your very kind comments, I appreciate it. 😊
3/21/23, 7:33 AM
Thanks for all the fun!

3/22/23, 4:17 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) You're very welcome! 😄 Thank you for all your comments, I appreciate it!