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3/26/23, 7:47 AM
Super hot, but still horribly terrifying! Not sure what to think -- except i need to read on. i need to read the next chapter.
3/25/23, 11:30 PM
I dunno if you’ll ever see this comment, but I just wanna say your story is flawless for me. Character, world building, description, and the hot stuff XD. I’ve read this a few times, here and on Ao3, thought I’d finally comment on how amazing it is
3/23/23, 10:38 PM
Before I finish the last chapter I have to say this has been great. The only thing that could possibly improve it would be "bad ends" along the way where our protagonist actually does get fucked and his quest ends and he becomes an incubus or the consort of an elder god or come inflated and actually impregnated by Zeus. But let's see how this goes.

3/24/23, 11:33 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) I'm so glad you've been enjoying it so far! Unfortunately I didn't put any "bad ends" into the story, mostly because of how none of the paths actually contradict each other — it's less of a splitting of realities and more a splitting of perspective, and then they all recombine at the end. But I agree that it'd be fun to read what those "bad ends" would look like... 😉
3/24/23, 10:17 PM
Another great chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, and I hope that Luke and Sammy can resolve this so they can be happy together. They obviously care a lot about each other, and I was sad to see them fight
3/24/23, 2:51 PM
Ah such a cute and wholesome story. I'm not that into TF, but this was hot. Also I need a bf like Anthony :3
3/24/23, 12:38 PM
THIS! This is such a great story. I loved the back and forth and the character development ... and the intimacy... gosh i wanted a kiss.
rwriter51
3/24/23, 5:14 AM
I've missed Luke's story for far too long! I'm glad that Luke and Sammy may be on the road to recovery, and I think the flashbacks add relevant context.
Jack
3/24/23, 4:02 AM
I'm so happy you continued this series. It's so good! I can't wait to see more chapters here. It feels like everything you write (this, Donkey Cakes, etc.) is just a work of art. A hot, sexy, cum-filled work of art.
3/24/23, 2:31 AM
Lovely chapter! Rimming is not my favourite thing in the world, on either end of it, but you did a great job with it here. And I absolutely love your characterization of Talley. You’ve really got a good handle on him. That, and the sensuality of everything, the gradual fleshing out of Consummation… chef’s kiss. Great work!
Mr. Vertigo
3/23/23, 8:20 PM
I've been reading your stories for years now and I just have to say you've come a long way when it comes to the quality of your work. Every part of the story is fun to read, the non-sex points actually carry weight and aren't just there to connect the fucking parts. The characters have emotion and arcs and it's all just top notch work. Great stuff dude!

3/23/23, 9:42 PM
@Mr. Vertigo Thank you, thank you! That means so much to me. I think I have improved as well, and my style has changed. I try to focus a lot more on characters now. I'm glad you are along for the ride. Actually, when I previewed this chapter I got a lot of feedback that the flashbacks were disruptive or unnecessary, but I'm glad I stuck to my guns and kept them in :)