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3/27/23, 3:20 PM
Dr. Ramoton's assumptions are not logical.
3/27/23, 8:28 AM
" ... just let his first customer of the day through so right? " I can't figure out what that sentence is supposed to mean?
nycboot
3/27/23, 12:10 AM
Long after this contest is forgotten, I think all of us readers are going to remember Carter and Brook. This is such a wonderful story, great characterizations - i'm sure the ratings will speak for themselves. Bravo!
3/26/23, 4:46 PM
I am not a writer, so can't really comment from a technical point of view, only as an enthusiastic reader. As a reader, i think the story is fantastic and so so hot. Domination and control are my primary fetishes, and the process by which the seduction and control is achieved is my primary turn-on. Your story hit it all. The repeated failed opportunities for the 'influencer' to regain control and your descriptions of his loss of mental focus were perfect. It was perfectly ironic that the influencer had no input or effect on the outcome of the story. These days the idea of an influencer being used as the hook makes the story seem so much more real. Thanks for a great story!
3/26/23, 9:19 AM
That was an amazing story of psychological manipulation, and so hotly done!
3/26/23, 7:47 AM
Super hot, but still horribly terrifying! Not sure what to think -- except i need to read on. i need to read the next chapter.
3/25/23, 11:30 PM
I dunno if you’ll ever see this comment, but I just wanna say your story is flawless for me. Character, world building, description, and the hot stuff XD. I’ve read this a few times, here and on Ao3, thought I’d finally comment on how amazing it is
3/23/23, 10:38 PM
Before I finish the last chapter I have to say this has been great. The only thing that could possibly improve it would be "bad ends" along the way where our protagonist actually does get fucked and his quest ends and he becomes an incubus or the consort of an elder god or come inflated and actually impregnated by Zeus. But let's see how this goes.

3/24/23, 11:33 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) I'm so glad you've been enjoying it so far! Unfortunately I didn't put any "bad ends" into the story, mostly because of how none of the paths actually contradict each other — it's less of a splitting of realities and more a splitting of perspective, and then they all recombine at the end. But I agree that it'd be fun to read what those "bad ends" would look like... 😉
3/24/23, 10:17 PM
Another great chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, and I hope that Luke and Sammy can resolve this so they can be happy together. They obviously care a lot about each other, and I was sad to see them fight
3/24/23, 2:51 PM
Ah such a cute and wholesome story. I'm not that into TF, but this was hot. Also I need a bf like Anthony :3