Recent Comments

3/28/23, 3:03 PM
Oh man, I read this SO fast - nicely, nicely done! I love the insight into Luke’s childhood, and the sensitivity you brought to the depravity he needs in his life. Hot, sexy, smart — I love this series!
3/26/23, 9:37 AM
I am so sorry someone stole your hard work. You have real talent! This wasn't going to go down a road I would have appreciated, but the attention to detail on the psychological corruption was out of this world.

3/28/23, 12:01 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) let me assure you that the ending i ~~am~~ _was_ working towards ~~will blow~~ _would have blown_ your cock off. _alas, because some doucheknuckle cunts can't act like they live in civilized society, now nobody gets to play with it. i've taken my toys and gone home._
3/25/23, 9:35 PM
I’ve never left a comment on erotica before, but I have to say that I adore this story! I was just looking for something to get off to—and don’t get me wrong, you absolutely succeeded on that front—but I ended up invested enough to keep reading even after I finished. The way you played with the medium of choose your own adventure stories was so clever. But that by itself wouldn’t be enough to carry a story. No, what I’m really impressed me was your ability to efficiently characterize every member of a pretty large cast. And the mythology nerd in me loved how you handled the Norse stuff. Big fan of Woddin and her wolves allowing themselves to change and grow over the centuries rather than remaining mostly static. So overall, just wanted to say great work. I’m excited to read your other stuff after the challenge is over.

3/27/23, 10:51 PM
@[Lambsbridge](/user/show/1176976) I'm really touched by this comment! Thank you for leaving it, I really appreciate it! I definitely was juggling a lot with this story, and hearing that all these different aspects (characters, mythology, form) were working successfully for a reader is incredibly gratifying to hear. 😊 Thank you again for leaving this comment. It made my day.
3/26/23, 11:32 AM
I’m binge reading this story and can’t stop! I’m cascading through the “wrong” branch, after following the Micah branch, and really can’t wait to read about Xavier succumbing to all those greedy tops! My slutty self, though, is awed by his willpower facing down all those cocks in this branch! I think I’m recognizing the author you chose to get inspired by in this Zeus branch. I’ll keep my deductions until, hopefully, we get answers. I have a guess about who you are too, but as you asked in other comments I won’t reveal my guess either (although if I’m correct I love the punny pseudonym). Definitely rating this very highly for the contest. Fingers crossed 🤞

3/27/23, 10:37 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) I'm so glad you've been enjoying the story, this is such a nice comment to receive! 😄 And I'm also very charmed that people keep making guesses on the authorship, haha. I think readers have guessed at least three different authors at this point... But yes, keep the guesses private for now! Gotta keep it anonymous till results are announced...
3/26/23, 1:13 PM
Oh man! The sex banter in this chapter is soooooo hot 🥵 I think Bruno and Tony could make me cum just by talking to me like that!

3/27/23, 10:30 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) Oh, don't tell Bruno and Tony *that*, you'll just encourage them to try and make it happen... 😉
3/27/23, 3:20 PM
Dr. Ramoton's assumptions are not logical.
3/27/23, 8:28 AM
" ... just let his first customer of the day through so right? " I can't figure out what that sentence is supposed to mean?
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3/27/23, 12:10 AM
Long after this contest is forgotten, I think all of us readers are going to remember Carter and Brook. This is such a wonderful story, great characterizations - i'm sure the ratings will speak for themselves. Bravo!
3/26/23, 4:46 PM
I am not a writer, so can't really comment from a technical point of view, only as an enthusiastic reader. As a reader, i think the story is fantastic and so so hot. Domination and control are my primary fetishes, and the process by which the seduction and control is achieved is my primary turn-on. Your story hit it all. The repeated failed opportunities for the 'influencer' to regain control and your descriptions of his loss of mental focus were perfect. It was perfectly ironic that the influencer had no input or effect on the outcome of the story. These days the idea of an influencer being used as the hook makes the story seem so much more real. Thanks for a great story!
3/26/23, 9:19 AM
That was an amazing story of psychological manipulation, and so hotly done!