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3/11/23, 6:01 PM
Love this story so much, I've read it multiple times :) any chance we will see the next chapter before the 1-year mark of this chapter's release (April 21st)? Hope things in real life are going well!

3/30/23, 3:03 AM
@[italianstalian1987](/user/show/2658220) Thanks for reading! I unfortunately lost my job a while back, so my writing has mostly been paid commissions lately. I still have the next chapter in drafts, but it's unlikely I'll finish it by April 21st. Fascinum chapter 4 will probably be my next GSS submission since it just needs some slight editing.
Anonymous
3/14/23, 5:26 AM
in addition to being hot, this is so so charming! i love superhero media, but don't always click with superhero themed porn? this, though, is absolutely perfect, ticks all my boxes. i know you're juggling a lot of plates (and i love all of them, so i won't be disappointed no matter what you put your energy into), but i will definitely be keeping my eye on this :-)

3/30/23, 2:59 AM
@Anonymous Thanks! Life threw me for a loop recently, so this story is low priority, but it's definitely still in the WIP pile. Fascinum will probably be my next installment.
Nutiper
3/29/23, 11:59 PM
Okay I know this is kinda a dumb thing to fixate on, but I love how you wrote Ig's jealousy of Brook at the start of the chapter. I feel like it's so easy to write jealousy in a way that feels ugly, or possessive. Instead, the way Ig gets jealous (and how he unknowingly reveals his actual tender feelings) makes him feel _more_ lovable. It makes us realize, too, that even with all the sexy smirking and babyboy-ing, he really _likes_ Carter. (And also it's just very very funny how terrible he is at hiding it. And how Mr. Ignacy himself fixates on Brook's _name_, of all things...) I feel like Ig and Carter had such fantastic sexual chemistry in the previous chapter that of course I couldn't help but want more of them. Like, wow! But I was still thinking of Brook and Carter as the "main couple" of the story... up until the opening of this chapter. You managed to get me rooting for a power _throuple_, all from the little jealousy scene alone.
3/29/23, 11:03 PM
I love this story SOOOO much. I really want it to just continue forever. My heart skips whenever I see another chapter posted. I’m going to be so sad when this comes to a conclusion but dear lord I love it. Excellent work all around!
Anonymous
3/29/23, 8:24 PM
The image looks like he shit on himself..

3/29/23, 10:04 PM
@Anonymous Yeah, it’s my bad, I’m a total amateur at digital art, but I wanna try and improve, and that mainly starts with tons of practice. I have yet to reach any moderate level to draw people or liquids for that matter.
3/29/23, 1:50 PM
It gets better EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER. Such a great story. Love the direction the cats ‘solution’ takes it.
Nutiper
3/29/23, 2:05 AM
For a while I've been sitting here trying to think of a way to explain what I like *so much* about this story. How there's a glow of "damn, this is so fun to *read*" down to the littlest detail. Brook calling Mr. Altamura the "Italian Stallion" and liking to neigh when he sees him through the window. Norm's face flexing like there's a bunch of wires behind it. The whole exchange of "Oh your name's Carter? You *look* like a Carter, wink wink" "Oh yeah, well what the hell is your name, buff security guard dude?!" "....Ignacy." I think the closest metaphor I've landed on is: it's like the prose is carbonated. "Sparkling erotica". Yeah, I know... SodaStream, eat your heart out! But hey, it makes the fingering-and-rimming scene between Ig and Carter incredibly fun to read, too. Somehow it ended up hotter and more intense than most of the actual sex scenes I've read on this site. Carbonation, in *my* smut? It's more likely than you think!
3/28/23, 4:35 PM
...this doesn't make sense. I'm reading a story that includes some of the dirtiest, most explicit sexual content I've ever read...and I'm _tearing up_. :p But seriously, this is truly incredible! Thank GOD you kept the flashbacks to Luke's childhood; the contrast between Coach gently taking care of Luke in the past to absolutely blowing his back out in the present was a work of genius (T.S. Eliot called that a "zeugma"--the "yoking" of two contrasting ideas). But it's also super-important because it absolutely explains WHY Coach is doing what he's doing. In the previous incarnation (which ended before we reached this chapter), the Coach's desire for Luke was almost too sexually-driven. Here, we see that what he does is ultimately an act of love and compassion--and not in a creepy "let's justify this sexual assault" way that many writers fall into, but a sense of genuine care for the kid. Your indications of consent and Luke being of age are also crucial to making the story work. Thank you for a truly incredible story. :)

3/28/23, 10:41 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thanks for the thoughtful comment. Yeah, it was really important for me to portray Coach as helping Luke, giving Luke what he needs, and not from any selfish lustful desires that he has. Love and compassion is the way to put it. TBH stories where coaches/teachers have sex with students make me very uncomfortable. So I really tried to create the right cocktail of circumstances for why it would be OK. I know I know it's just a silly porn story, but there is a certain ick factor for me. Glad you enjoyed the flashbacks, I'm happy that I kept them in too.
3/28/23, 6:09 PM
Am I sick for thinking that the janitor thing actually happend and he's subconsciously suppressing it to the point he's reliving it as dreams? Esp. with the panic episode and all that. (I know that's not the case, per your reply, but that's what I thought after reading the woke up yelling from a nightmare situation) Idk, that'd be both hot, traumatic, and would drive the story to a completely different spiral where he eventually confront the janitor again, and depending on if he has emotional support (coach & sammy etc.), wreck him. (Headcanon) I'm sick.

3/28/23, 6:31 PM
@[CieL](/user/show/748750) That’s a hot scenario, but yeah, not what I’m going for. I think I kinda messed up writing the dream. It’s not supposed to be scary; it’s supposed to be erotic and hot, leaning into a bit of degradation kink, contrasting the slovenly janitor with the clean cut jock. I don’t think Luke is even afraid, since he could easily fight the janitor off. I’ll have to give it another pass through.
3/28/23, 3:03 PM
Oh man, I read this SO fast - nicely, nicely done! I love the insight into Luke’s childhood, and the sensitivity you brought to the depravity he needs in his life. Hot, sexy, smart — I love this series!