Simply AMAZING

Dude, that was fucking awesome as usual! You surpassed every expectation I had for how Jon would finally figure out how to deal with his horniness, amazing job! Only thing I could suggest forward would be for Jon to figure out how he can "take showers" without wasting too much water because he sweats too much during summer days. Wait until he finds out what roomie can do with his tongue!

Like the other commenters I was all ready to see how this tale ended and then vote you Emperor of the Contest. Well, even without that, this is a superb story - hot, sweet, funny, original, delightful in its big strokes and its tiny details! Clearly this is not your first...read-eo...and whenever we get to find out who you are I'll be searching for all your other read-eos, even if they are friggin' accounting textbooks. You, Sir, are a Writer! I'll be standing outside your virtual window cheering each additional chapter!

I found this story really hot and a brilliant use of the story branching concept. I do prefer less wholesome endings though. I'd love an alternate ending where the guy's expectation of a boyfriend is changed such that they're all okay just treating Xavier like a cumdump piece of meat. Something like "Anyone who fucks a slut likes seeing them dominated by other tops and will make sure the only thing the slut has to think about is pleasing cock with their holes." I like protagonists getting their lives ruined in nasty ways haha what can I say?

This chapter is perfect!! Really, I love the way heaven doesn't mind Father-Son sex so much as it's needed to be rooted in love. I'm very excited to see how this will go. Really do hope Blake can save his father with some loving sex!!!

If his ankles are at his ears, his toes wouldn't be pointing at the ceiling. Speaking from experience.

I need a spin off of these characters. The daddy is so hot

Whew. One of my favorite parts of this chapter is the way you've taken a recently-popularized trend on the site—aka, self-lubricating butts—and done a spin on it that feels distinctive and somehow *intimate*. Like, *romantic* butt-lube... The fact that Carter describes it to himself as 'the lube my body had made *for* my buddy Brook'... Or the way Carter shivers and reacts to the feeling of cold air hitting his lubed hole, and seems viscerally affected by the sensations... Or the way its pheromone-laden scent 'bursts into the air like a spray of cologne' and causes Brook to be even *more* turned on and growly as he's making out with Carter... Butt-lube as eros. I love it. Let me put *that* on my next Valentine card... As other commenters have said, I'm really excited to read the remaining chapters when the contest is over! This story is fantastic, and incredibly fun.

Rules of the Game Players: Nick - Straight/Bi himbo puppy; under Hypnotism D, Curse 1, Curse 2a: oblivious to all rules and players except Darius Darius - Gay Handler; under Curse 2b, avoided Hypnotism S; in control of Nick via Curse 1; knows about Hypnotism, all Curses, and all Players except Deborah (?) Gwen - Computer programmer, responsible for Hypnotism; doesn't know about Deborah or Curses, thinks both Nick and Darius are hypnotized, doesn't know Darius knows; doesn't know Darius and Nick are actually dating Deborah - Goth, responsible for Curse 2; messed up Curse 2, having a breakdown that Darius doesn't seem to be effected by curse 2b; doesn't know about Gwen, Hypnotism, Curse 1 or that Darius and Nick are actually dating May - Unalligned friend to all Players; has experienced Curse 1; doesn't know about any of this Trish: Witchy Referee responsible for Curse 1; "fixed" Curse 2 will undo everything but Curse 1 in a year; knows all the Rules, doesn't care about the Players Rules: Curse 1 - Cast by Trish to get a good fucking; when Nick and a girl are mutually attracted to each other, they go into "The Zone" and start mindlessly fucking each other; despite what she says, has many consent concerns, such as almost causing a fuck session in the middle of the airport and causing this whole misunderstanding based mess in the first place; also gives a dude Nick trusts ultimate control/veto power over him Curse 2 - supposed to drain muscle from Darius (b) and give to Nick (a) when a orders b around; was accidentally draining muscle from all dudes (fixed); makes b give into a's commands Hypnotism - makes D into an Alpha Douche King who orders everyone around, and S into a subby bottom; D is currently effecting Nick, S is not effecting anyone (intended for Darius) Twue Wuv: Darius has feelings for Nick independent of all of the above, Nick was under Curse 1 when he asked Darius to date him I think that's everything? PS: I'm going to miss Nick's muscles ☹️

The intertwining approach of past and current is so fucked up but it works. Like talking about your childhood while having sex kind of fucked up, but it does justify(?) coach's thought process. And that he thought Luke would be his son in law... awww. One thing though, I did not expect Coach to be such a level-headed and coherent person. He's also a lot younger than I expect, in the way he speak (read: the way this chapter is written), but it also feel distinct from Luke's (read: previous chapters), which is drown in clueless-ness and lust. Might just be stereotyping, but when I think of coaches (or any father figure) the first thing that comes to mind is "incapablility of articulating thoughts in the way they think should be expressed". Maybe bc he's a single father? Or maybe he's just not a stereotype. Kinda refreshing, but also make me feel guilty of thinking of him that way.