Recent Comments

6/6/23, 10:30 PM
That is the question: how far can he take it and not have it all implode? And when it does what will be left of any of them? Hopefully he can at least keep Adam and Jake.
6/6/23, 11:56 AM
It seems to took every fetish I have and made the perfect story out of it. Reminds me of my first every erotica, _Seaside Delights_, but gay. Yay! Good work!
6/6/23, 1:18 AM
Oh this was hot. I like the ficking and the growing submission. Here's hoping to maybe some rimming. But yeah I like him producing cum and making them his. The dads becoming his too is hot too.
Flipper
6/5/23, 10:18 PM
This was hot but how do they leave the bed? They don’t have legs any more! Lawks.

6/6/23, 12:20 AM
@Flipper Let's say they phone a friend to help them to some water and then proceed to fuck his brains out? And a pod begins to form. ;)
Anonymous
6/5/23, 11:18 PM
I NEED more of this. One of the hottest stories on here for me. Great writing and premise and i really enjoy the characters as well as their interations, sexy kinky and otherwise
Anonymous
6/5/23, 5:57 PM
Excellent!!
Anonymous
6/5/23, 5:56 PM
Spectacular!!
6/5/23, 3:31 PM
Good first start and you can see the budding bromance to romance forming. I can't wait for more.
6/4/23, 10:56 PM
Pretty good for a first story! I’m looking forward to seeing the rest :)
5/28/23, 6:37 PM
Before I ever read a story the summery reals me in. A good story catching snip bit can really draw people in. So instead of you introducing yourself as a new writer, say something about your story and the characters in it. Your introduction can go right before the story begins inside a few (of these). That way people know it’s not about the story. That’s one way or another way is a line under your introduction to break it from the rest of the story. Here’s an example of one I did something like what I’m saying. https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10006069

6/4/23, 7:29 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thank you for your feedback. I didnt realize as I was filling out the submission form that what I put there would end up as the intro displayed. I will look into adjusting it.

6/4/23, 10:37 PM
@[Bowtied boy Jason](/user/show/255330) Sure no problem! I believe that you got something here that could get more traffic.