Recent Comments

4/23/23, 8:08 PM
Love me a gay city story. Truly fun.

4/24/23, 1:05 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Thank you so much for the comment. If you enjoyed this one, check out my previous entry in the series for another himbo city story.

4/24/23, 1:13 AM
@[JaysonGayman](/user/show/10026898) Oh, I did. You’re on my radar now. ;)

4/24/23, 2:48 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Aw! Excellent. Thank you so much!
Down The Foxhole
4/24/23, 2:27 AM
I’m so happy for this sweet and sappy part. I’m rooting for them to win because I’m an optimist at heart and I love fairytales with happy endings. Getting them together and still having sexy fun after all this would be so tooth-rottingly sweet. I haven’t been so invested in characters for a long time and I think the kind love between them is just so palpable and likable that I just want them to win. I don’t want them to lose that to the dark. I was so scared when Peter began being too rough with Blake, cursing at him and stuff but the sweetness when Blake got through him, eyes and cock in tears babe 😭

4/24/23, 2:39 AM
@[Down The Foxhole](/user/show/204705) I'm glad you liked it! I'm not sure if the lovey-dovey stuff or the rough stuff made me more nervous. Cock and eye crying--that's the new standard. ;)
Sebastián Apollo
4/22/23, 11:44 PM
Hey, this is a little belated, but I just wanted to say amazing work and join in on the choir of praise. I concur with every commenter so far, exceptional writing and characterization. I remember originally reading this on Literotica, so congratulations on setting up an account here on GKS! And, as always, I hope the best for Jacob and Christian!

CasualWanderer82
4/23/23, 8:39 AM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Hey Sebastian! Thanks for the positive feedback, means a lot! I'll be posting the rest of the story soon. P.S. When will we get a "Above My Paygrade" sequel? Really loved that one! 😜

Sebastián Apollo
4/24/23, 12:37 AM
@[CasualWanderer82](/user/show/10035964) Haha, that's great to hear! I can't wait to catch up and read the rest! I actually designed "Above My Paygrade" as a standalone story, but I could see a possible springboard for a sequel if I choose to take that route! I have some projects currently underway, but I'll keep it in mind! 😉
4/23/23, 11:16 PM
So wonderfully and unexpectedly sweet, a welcome surprise. Especially loved the ending, temptation is the tool indeed.

4/23/23, 11:35 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) For a hot second I considered making tio.rico into tio.hector instead and linking this story with Driving for Luber, but in the end I figured that Hector wouldn’t waste his time online. Still, these little twists are how I have my fun…
4/23/23, 11:06 PM
This was WELL worth the wait...I'm so impressed with this story. Seriously, the journey is so well thought out, the progress is the perfect amount, the anticipation for more is second to none, and the emotions are perfectly described. It's strange how invested I am in this smut and the characters within it. You've impressed us all with your talents, but, for me, this is a masterpiece...one of many that you've written, for sure; but personally, this is my favorite. Possibly even my favorite story on the site. Thank you so much for sharing your talents!!

4/23/23, 11:14 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Aw, thanks Edlam. Of all my stories, these chapters make me the most hesitant to post because I’m kind of a marshmallow at heart. Glad that not everyone is repulsed and even gladder to have excellent fans of the series.
4/23/23, 7:59 PM
There are people willing to edit, if you're willing! I know some people don't want their stories touched though.

4/23/23, 8:05 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I don't mind assistance. More so that I don't really seek out any help.
4/16/23, 8:57 PM
There is a fantastic mind control story here, between the truly boggling grammatical errors and malapropisms. They don't do this story the justice it deserves. Someone needs to edit this, because it's an amazing classic hypnosis piece.

autoDream
4/23/23, 7:38 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Apologies, I usually just spit these stories out in one sitting, and don't really re read or edit. Just like getting some fantasies out into the world. More of an idea person, rather than a writer perhaps. Haha. But I do appreciate that you like the story <3
4/23/23, 11:25 AM
This story about Theo and his roommate is absolutely fantastic!! I LOVE it and I hope there will be a lot of sequels. Maybe there will be some other teammates. Or just Jon and Teddy taking turns during classes in the restrooms. Or Teddy has a game and needs some relive... Or a brother (or - quite naughty - a dad in great shape and with a monster between his legs) during the holidays.... Soooo many opportunities...
Anonymous
4/22/23, 5:33 PM
this story gets hotter and hotter…
4/22/23, 1:17 AM
A lovely start ! Waiting to read the rest soon