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4/25/23, 2:39 PM
That BJ scene is divine. So detailed you really feel like it’s happening to you. Todd is a hot arrogant fucker and he needs to take advantage of all these himbos.

4/25/23, 6:07 PM
@[Charlie Walker](/user/show/1052782) Thanks so much. I am glad the detail worked nicely. We'll be seeing more of Todd soon.
4/25/23, 4:15 AM
One of the greatest stories EVER on this website! I’m in paradise whenever I find stories such as this one, with everything I like: dumb jocks, himbos, trickery and manipulation, huge cocks, muscle asses and bubble butts. I’d love to live in Apollo City. Can’t wait for more!

4/25/23, 6:07 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you so much for the kind words. I am happy you like it so much. More to cum soon!
Deamon
4/25/23, 3:16 PM
Oh my, where to go with this one. I agree this series is the best ever (only equaled by Stepdad Becomes Real Dad). But I have completely mixed feelings about this chapter. Lovey dovey is great, but that could have come in the next chapter. When Blake wasn't "taken" by Peter my dick went a little limp : ) ... after all the buildup, and ... a bit of a letdown. The hotness is in the unawareness/awareness factor. When they both became aware and still engaged ... I just kinda' felt the weeks of buildup just ... fizzled? So now Peter and Blake are what? Lovers? Gay? Not sure if I want to keep going with this series if the tension between Blake and Peter isn't resurrected. Oh well, it was perfect up to now, and that's no mean feat! I'm still a fan!!!!
4/25/23, 12:46 PM
Amazing work!! Definitely want to see more chapters! Bravo!
PradyChan
4/25/23, 6:04 AM
I don't usually comment on the stories here. But my gods, this is literally a gold mine of a story. I've read all the chapters, beginning to end multiple times now. And keep checking if you have more updates. Masterful storytelling. Hyper intriguing plot lines. Well Fleshed out characters. Kudos. Bravo. All that good stuff.
Ab3
4/24/23, 4:07 PM
That's a really awesome story... Looking for more parts and want to see this superhero turning into a bitch in heat begging a Gangster for relief

4/24/23, 5:32 PM
@[Ab3](/user/show/10036556) Thank you :) This is a preview for the novella, so you could check that out for the continuation.
4/24/23, 12:34 PM
Damn, this was hot! A whole symphony of man meat and casual homoeroticism the whole time; I loved it. And that facefuck? Man, I love a well-written sloppy blowjob, gagging and all…

4/24/23, 4:18 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I am so happy to hear you enjoyed. It was my first time writing a sloppy blowjob. There will be plenty more homoerotic fun to cum in the future!
4/24/23, 6:50 AM
This is by far the best story on this site. Thanks for sticking to it. I can not wait for the conclusion. Now we clearly see the difference between the to sides, between control and care, but there still is a sizeable loophole. Blake even says here that he kinda likes his dad to be so in control. I also really like the ending. Tanners influence is not something that can so easily be reversed. I found this part particularly enticing_: "After Sunday, you won’t be plagued by these doubts ever again. You’ll see your purpose clearly and be galvanized by it, I promise"_ I am very curious to see what kind of pastor he will be and what kind of church we will have when all this is done.

4/24/23, 12:53 PM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) Aw, thanks! I really appreciate readers like you sticking through to the end. And you’re right—Peter could very well be the rock a whole new kind of church is built on. Not too long before we’ll find out!
4/24/23, 3:11 AM
This chapter is so good. I'm rooting for tanner to win lol

4/24/23, 3:14 AM
@[Somnius](/user/show/648890) It might look uncertain for Tanner now that he’s been exposed, but he has some tricks left…