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6/14/23, 11:06 PM
This was completely remarkable. Literary in tone and a fantastic amount of world-building. And I definitely saw the Altered Carbon nods.

6/16/23, 11:52 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you so much, that's hugely encouraging to us both! Actually, we have some plans to eventually do some rewriting of about the first 8 chapters to smooth a few things and maybe add a bit more here and there. Probably after the next chapter we publish!
6/15/23, 8:44 PM
I absolutely adore the slow-burn nature of this. The imagery is amazing, and the little hints of what is to come are so titillating. Just fantastic.
6/15/23, 5:55 PM
This is so damn wholesome my god. Wholesome, well written and I love everyone in it. Yarif is peak himbo and I love him.

6/15/23, 6:15 PM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) Awww. Shucks dude. Thanks for the read. Ehh... Yeah. He really is a character close to my heart. I sure hope he doesn't get too badly messed around in the story...:eyes:
6/15/23, 6:13 AM
You threw me with the term: BEANIE. I've always thought that BEANIE was a kid's cap or a woman's hat. But I see that in some parts of the world, BEANIE is the word that we in the States might call a SKULL CAP or a WATCH CAP.
6/14/23, 9:03 PM
Love to hear more about how they put the baby to sleep. Do they do it with Hypnosis or do they do it with some sleep medication so that the baby sleeps all through the night.
6/14/23, 4:40 PM
This is so much fun!
6/14/23, 4:09 AM
amazing start. I am really intrigued.
Lampshade15
6/13/23, 2:34 AM
Really good premise, can't wait to see where you take the story next!