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6/25/23, 3:45 AM
Oh okay, now i got it, the price of the label wish is his age. Nice, i wonder whats gonna happen next, especially his relationship history with Mason as he gets older.

6/25/23, 4:04 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Yeah that's all in good time. There's at least two more chapters ahead.
6/24/23, 3:45 PM
More..More..Love to see more of anything about **BROTHERS**:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
6/24/23, 3:11 PM
I absolutely love Thad, and Alexander -- Bellamy I'm more conflicted on, but that's fine. I have really enjoyed what you've put out so far, and think the writing is top notch. Very glad you were recommended by Soren Fitz!
6/24/23, 5:49 AM
A very intriguing beginning to this story. I especially enjoyed the double twist at the end with the CEO's partial plan being revealed followed immediately by the technicians undermining it.

6/24/23, 1:22 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I wasn't originally going to have the double twist. It was originally going to just be Patrick kind of screwing himself by ignoring the warnings and giving in to his desires. Sean originally only planned to do exactly what he put in the contract and offer, but he gave in to temptation at the last minute to ensure that he had complete control of Patrick. So that meant that Sean needed to be taken down a peg as well. Part of the story's intent was to illustrate how people could be corrupted by this technology, and the three technicians were not completely amoral and we know that whistleblowers are a thing so...

6/24/23, 1:38 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Yeah, I really liked that part and thought it rang true. These technicians would have to be smart people but at the same time they don't have the kind of wealth and power that their boss has. Would they just go along with his shameless plan to enslave someone? Would you? If the opportunity presented itself to be the fly in the ointment to that kind of dastardly plan, wouldn't you do it? I think a lot of people would.
John
6/24/23, 5:14 AM
Please part 2!

6/24/23, 1:22 PM
@[John](/user/show/10013303) I'm glad you liked it. Since this is an anthology series, the next part I am planning to post will be its own standalone story dealing with AI. But I agree the characters are really interesting and so is the situation. I probably will revisit this a little later. Even though it's framed in a high-tech setting and gay, this is after all basically the story of a rich man paying for plastic surgery for his companion, and that is absolutely a real thing that happens which means the dramatic beats are completely valid.
6/24/23, 3:49 AM
I loved this chapter even more than the first. And...something strange and fun was going on in that library basement, and with that frat. I love wondering if there's a weird magic at play.
6/23/23, 11:17 PM
I love this story so much! I particularly like how much of a bottom slut the coach really is. Wish he was more vocal during the fuck in talking dirty and asking to be fucked, but we always have the next chapter for that ;) Congrats on another great chapter!
6/23/23, 10:48 PM
How fun this was! I really enjoyed the farcical nature of it, and the sex scene was off the charts on fire. Loved it!
6/22/23, 9:15 AM
On a more general note: I get why authors want comments and engagement, but also, some of my favorite stories on this site have had little commentary. It's not an indicator of your quality or anyone else's whether someone has something to say afterwards, imo. (Though I'm glad people started engaging over time here obviously). Especially for older hidden gems on the site. I often feel like I've found buried treasure, discovering a story written a decade ago here with no comments.

6/23/23, 12:30 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) It’s actually, to me, less about quality and more about the desire to see my work as _seen_. When I get a comment I’m most excited when it notices things I was attempting to communicate. I see my art as successful when it gets across what I was trying to get across. Comments tell me “we, the audience, we picked up what you were putting down”. If that makes sense!