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Anonymous
6/1/25, 3:53 PM
This story is absurd. Keep it going for the love of god.

lukas pucci
6/2/25, 5:50 PM
@Anonymous lmao i will i promise
6/2/25, 9:54 AM
I hope there is more.
6/2/25, 12:14 AM
So, grin, when's the chapter that is like "I rimmed my straight friend's hole for content" and "I fucked and bred my straight friend for views" hehe There being ass is fun, and the slow and steady actions here is fun.

6/2/25, 1:40 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you brother. Here's what to expect. Next Part: My Throat, His Rules - The Countdown Game (Deepthroat Game) After that: My straight gym bro asked me to tongue his hole and fuck him on camera Give you both of these together. Hope you like it brother.

6/2/25, 1:54 AM
@[DanXWrites](/user/show/10062452) Oooh nice! That sounds super fun. Looking forward to the rimming and the fucking. Sounds awesome. (So I will admit that my happy end is "My straight gym bro is now my good boy!" cause I like gay dom (top) and subby once straight boy. But I figure you have a different ending planned. hehe) Seriously though cool stuff. Interesting progression. Also the baby steps of how things develop is fun to read.

6/2/25, 1:57 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you bro. I definitely want to explore a lot more in this. Don't want to keep Brad as the Alpha dom. Instead, have him submit from time to time. I don't have any ending planned. I have written a couple of parts after this. Different scenarios, roleplay, scenes, etc. Just making sure that every part is hotter than the one before. Thanks for reading man!
6/2/25, 12:10 AM
Bravo! I like how the narrator Pat’s werewolf qualities come out - the sense of smell, most of all. I LOVED when Pat realizes he’s tracking the daddies by scent, instinctually and not consciously at first. That was very well done, and a very clever way of showing the wolf side of him is taking over his nature, not just his physical appearance. I’ve never read someone writing about tracking by scent in such a good manner. Bravo! I also like how you’re indicating all the camp ground residents are ‘in-the-know’ and making comments to one another that give clues to the narrator (and the reader) about the world we’re entering. It makes me wonder who’s all wolf, who’s mortal but in-the-know, and who’s a hapless camper. I’m also curious to see if all remains hunky-dory-let’s-fuck, or if there a dark side to the camp as well. Continue! Continue!
6/1/25, 3:01 PM
Interesting start. Curious to see where it goes.

Anonymous
6/1/25, 3:02 PM
@Jonanator Dont expect much its something i wrote in the spur of the moment and imagination its a little messy and inconsistent hahahaha sometimes its all over the place but meh hahahahahaha
Jaques
6/1/25, 1:35 PM
Excellent storytelling. Keep it up.

6/1/25, 1:58 PM
@Jaques Thanks so much!
6/1/25, 1:16 PM
The slow drip... OMGOSH... it is making me so excited! THANKYOU for this wonderful storytelling. TELL ME MORE!

6/1/25, 1:56 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Next part is releasing soon! Gulp Gulp Better catch it all.
6/1/25, 4:09 AM
You are very good at storytelling. This is something I could see on Amazon as one of their pay to print books. Keep it coming
Xan
6/1/25, 3:49 AM
Such a good read, can't wait for more! <3
M.A.B.
5/30/25, 5:34 PM
Ngl I keep coming back to see if there's more. I am loving this series. Noah, y is Liam such a little bitch?

lukas pucci
5/31/25, 4:06 PM
@M.A.B. NOAH: that’s the thing dude he doesn’t even know it. also i hear chapter 6 is up and waiting approval so u might get it today.