Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/18/23, 6:18 AM
I'm hanging onto EVERY. DAMN. WORD. of this series. EXCELLENT. You definitely got me hooked!
J
5/17/23, 6:09 PM
Hot! I was hoping Luke got his fat ass pounded by his teammates 😈 But beggars can’t be choosers! Love following this series. Thanks for the upload!

5/17/23, 9:52 PM
@J Patience patience. Only 1 more chapter left ;)
Martin
5/17/23, 8:38 PM
10 out of 5 for Romance and 5 out of 5 for writing. Wow. I really love this. It's almost too perfect a love story.

CasualWanderer82
5/17/23, 8:53 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks man! :blush:
5/17/23, 3:56 PM
What a beautiful, happy and sad story. I urge you to keep it going thru Jacob, casy and Christian's son. Also you could change it a bit so there are more than one immortals souls.
5/17/23, 5:01 AM
So much heart.......

CasualWanderer82
5/17/23, 3:48 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Is that a good thing...? :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
5/17/23, 1:21 PM
This has been a great series.
5/17/23, 2:15 AM
Oh, I have been WAITING for this--and it didn't disappoint. "Twice-told-tales"--the same story retold from multiple perspectives--are among my favorites, but they're very tricky to pull off...and this was PERFECT! Seeing the previous events of the story--the first practice with Coach, the discovery in the bathroom stall, the first time Sammy fucked Luke--from Sammy's perspective, in all of its confusion and longing, completely reshape how we see those chapters. And I love how you paint Sammy with so many dimensions: a fuckboy with a heart, someone motivated above all by love but not afraid of the sexual aspect of that love. Even Anwar gets a bit of development, which speaks volumes about your ability to provide excellent characterization with just a few sentences. Thank you for sharing your gift with us! :)

5/17/23, 2:30 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) “Fuckboy with a heart” oh my god that’s exactly Sammy haha Glad you enjoyed. You’re one of my most enthusiastic readers and you always give great comments, so thank you for that.
Anonymous
5/17/23, 12:54 AM
You knocked it out of the park with this one. Great character work! While the erotic bits were brief and recaps, you still managed to make them fresh and super hot. Can’t wait to see what comes next!
5/16/23, 9:40 AM
Luke has so many people who care about him and not just for his fat ass <3 heartwarming and hot at the same time :) Poor little himbo Luke needs all the support (and fat dongs) he can get