Recent Comments

5/27/23, 3:55 AM
God I love this.
5/26/23, 2:24 PM
I really enjoyed the story. Your writing is excellent, and your portrayal of jocks needing to feel superior ( no matter by what means) is spot on. Can't wait to read about reactions and results of Brotein "injections" on the rest of the team...
5/26/23, 1:35 PM
i really enjoy this story ... and, i am so hopeful that the brotein will make one of the men want to kiss him! ...
5/26/23, 8:20 AM
Amazing setup!
AgentCoyner
5/25/23, 8:24 PM
_Really_ looking forward to where this goes, I love the start!!!
5/25/23, 7:25 PM
I’ve been logging into the site very infrequently of late, but damn if I wasn’t absolutely thrilled to see a new instalment in what is easily one of my favourite series waiting for me! Very nice work here — I really like how we get more insight into Sammy’s end of things, which in turn manages to flesh out Luke even further. Plus, it goes without saying, very hot sex (per usual). Keep it coming!
5/25/23, 5:01 PM
Personally, I don't want to live in a universe where Tanner wins. I hope Peter's dithering is just a dark night of the soul followed by the sunrise and light. The story is called Love begins at home not lust wins. Damn, I feel strongly about this; more than I thought. Must be the excellent writing. I think I might have a crush on Blake and really don't want to see (lol read) his disappointment if his father lets him down. Go team cat!
5/25/23, 6:04 AM
Like kgard12 I am finding this story hard to put down. I started it yesterday and have taken every spare moment to read more. The most disappointing aspect of the story is that I've come to the end of the published chapters only to find i will have to wait to spend more time with these amazing characters. This seems like in one day I've become heavily addicted, I fall asleep, and wake up the next morning in rehab having to go cold turkey. It's harsh! I so love this story! I am finding something hot and unexpected around every corner. The pacing is perfect, and in spite of some moral issues with Marcus (it is fiction after all), I love all the characters. Personally I keep experimenting with hypnosis myself to try to decide how effective it really is. Still not quite sure how effective since it seems to make changes so slowly through massive repetition l can't be quite sure at any point exactly where I started. Not so with Marcus's Chrysalis process. I need to try it myself to see if it works as well as it seems. @PuffDeamon Thanks so much for a really enthralling story!
5/25/23, 1:08 AM
Looking forward to see how this is going to turn out
5/24/23, 5:40 PM
I just wanna say I already know this is gonna be great.