Fantastic so far! Looking forward to part 3, hopefully!

The work-out scene and the bondage that follows it were exceptional pieces of writing. There was plenty of detail which gave it an aura of authenticity, yet the reader does not get distracted by the details. The character development for Marcus and Stanley moves ahead -- relentlessly. I am in awe of your skills, Puff. And I am a sucker for an S/M author who takes time to describe how things smell. Your work smells more than most. ;-) Now as to the issue of the morality of Marcus, our main character, I am not as distressed by him as are some readers. Somehow I never was. (Maybe its my sadistic side coming out.) There is no more malignant behavior in Marcus than there is in an average antagonist in a "Law and Order" or "The Blacklist" episode. Of course, we have to assume that this is being read by a reasonably discerning adult audience -- just like we do with a TV later night program. Every chapter reveals some small trait of Marcus' personality, which makes him like most humans -- a mystery both fascinating and terrible. I'd like to know if Marcus is an alter-ego for you Puff, or a combination of men you have known (or want to know) in real life? Whoever he may be, I have always sensed that there is something quite likable about him. I'd like to hang out with Marcus if he were a real guy and rummage around with him in the dark corners of my fantasies. Puff, I know that you are not telling us everything about Marcus for reasons that you have chosen to uncover only in small pieces. I wait for a revelation that shows him to be better than he appears. Proof of my intuition here stems from the deep seated friendship that Stanley exhibits toward him, time and time again. While evil is attractive, here's a case where Stanley is somehow not converted to evil when he is with Marcus. Hypnotism and "Moth to the Flame" do not seem to be adequate explanations. Beside the obvious benefits of friendship, both men are changing each other in ways that helps them grow into a deep and weird love. Can't think of too many other stories of this genre that are driven by such a well articulated character progression.

Sweet

The persona of Markus and Stanley are not just one dimensional, they exhibit layers of complex emotions. That kind of exposition is rare on this site. Nice writing, Puff.

I have the sense that we are under the spell of a masterful writer, who carefully lays out his characters and story line in a very meticulous way.

A wonderful and very hot tale of love, loss, and lust.

Yeah, a slow build, but a good one. You're sucking me into the characters and story line.

thanks for another event and for the admin to share about helping the site. personally the game is pretty fun, you don't have to buy stuff to enjoy by any means. obviously knowing if you do helps here is great. May not be everyone's cup of tea but worth looking at.

I've been enjoying it! I signed up when you first posted and was immediately hooked. ID: 1097448

This was some good shit! I’m always happy to see more representation in my erotica, and the rough, messy sex was hot as fuck. Loving it.