Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/5/23, 11:18 PM
I NEED more of this. One of the hottest stories on here for me. Great writing and premise and i really enjoy the characters as well as their interations, sexy kinky and otherwise
Anonymous
6/5/23, 5:57 PM
Excellent!!
Anonymous
6/5/23, 5:56 PM
Spectacular!!
6/5/23, 3:31 PM
Good first start and you can see the budding bromance to romance forming. I can't wait for more.
6/4/23, 10:56 PM
Pretty good for a first story! I’m looking forward to seeing the rest :)
5/28/23, 6:37 PM
Before I ever read a story the summery reals me in. A good story catching snip bit can really draw people in. So instead of you introducing yourself as a new writer, say something about your story and the characters in it. Your introduction can go right before the story begins inside a few (of these). That way people know it’s not about the story. That’s one way or another way is a line under your introduction to break it from the rest of the story. Here’s an example of one I did something like what I’m saying. https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10006069

6/4/23, 7:29 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thank you for your feedback. I didnt realize as I was filling out the submission form that what I put there would end up as the intro displayed. I will look into adjusting it.

6/4/23, 10:37 PM
@[Bowtied boy Jason](/user/show/255330) Sure no problem! I believe that you got something here that could get more traffic.
5/31/23, 1:42 PM
I enjoyed would have like a bit more detail in the the clothing and how they were before the transition but I enjoyed none less.

6/4/23, 7:31 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Thank you for your feedback. I will make sure to include more details like you mentioned in my upcoming stories.
6/1/23, 4:22 PM
I loved the story but it MUST continue. It is just a start. If not it will be just another good story not a memorable one, And, of course, the two main character have to unite as a team with Kenneth & Thad.

Sebastián Apollo
6/3/23, 10:59 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thankfully, we still have a little bit left to go. We shall see how it all turns out! :smiley:
6/3/23, 2:00 PM
This was a hot set of sex scenes, and I’m glad Papi got to unload in Thad’s ass after all; Kenneth stealing that cumshot was positively wicked! I also understand why Papi is reconsidering—this situation was incredibly stressful, I’m sure, and no one should have to walk around with a career-destroying secret on their shoulders all the time. I appreciate that he’s seriously thinking about it.

Sebastián Apollo
6/3/23, 10:55 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) As always, thank you for the kind words Soren. It's been a tizzy trying to balance the seriousness of the situation with the sex scenes and lightheartedness of it all, so I'm glad some are enjoying all aspects of the story!
6/3/23, 4:40 PM
Wow! Just found this story. It's incredible. Didn't realize this type of premise would be so hot!! Cannot wait to see what happens next. Thank you Elmara for introducing me to the world of dumb jocks :)