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6/24/23, 3:45 PM
More..More..Love to see more of anything about **BROTHERS**:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
6/24/23, 3:11 PM
I absolutely love Thad, and Alexander -- Bellamy I'm more conflicted on, but that's fine. I have really enjoyed what you've put out so far, and think the writing is top notch. Very glad you were recommended by Soren Fitz!
6/24/23, 5:49 AM
A very intriguing beginning to this story. I especially enjoyed the double twist at the end with the CEO's partial plan being revealed followed immediately by the technicians undermining it.

6/24/23, 1:22 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I wasn't originally going to have the double twist. It was originally going to just be Patrick kind of screwing himself by ignoring the warnings and giving in to his desires. Sean originally only planned to do exactly what he put in the contract and offer, but he gave in to temptation at the last minute to ensure that he had complete control of Patrick. So that meant that Sean needed to be taken down a peg as well. Part of the story's intent was to illustrate how people could be corrupted by this technology, and the three technicians were not completely amoral and we know that whistleblowers are a thing so...

6/24/23, 1:38 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Yeah, I really liked that part and thought it rang true. These technicians would have to be smart people but at the same time they don't have the kind of wealth and power that their boss has. Would they just go along with his shameless plan to enslave someone? Would you? If the opportunity presented itself to be the fly in the ointment to that kind of dastardly plan, wouldn't you do it? I think a lot of people would.
John
6/24/23, 5:14 AM
Please part 2!

6/24/23, 1:22 PM
@[John](/user/show/10013303) I'm glad you liked it. Since this is an anthology series, the next part I am planning to post will be its own standalone story dealing with AI. But I agree the characters are really interesting and so is the situation. I probably will revisit this a little later. Even though it's framed in a high-tech setting and gay, this is after all basically the story of a rich man paying for plastic surgery for his companion, and that is absolutely a real thing that happens which means the dramatic beats are completely valid.
6/24/23, 3:49 AM
I loved this chapter even more than the first. And...something strange and fun was going on in that library basement, and with that frat. I love wondering if there's a weird magic at play.
6/23/23, 11:17 PM
I love this story so much! I particularly like how much of a bottom slut the coach really is. Wish he was more vocal during the fuck in talking dirty and asking to be fucked, but we always have the next chapter for that ;) Congrats on another great chapter!
6/23/23, 10:48 PM
How fun this was! I really enjoyed the farcical nature of it, and the sex scene was off the charts on fire. Loved it!
6/22/23, 9:15 AM
On a more general note: I get why authors want comments and engagement, but also, some of my favorite stories on this site have had little commentary. It's not an indicator of your quality or anyone else's whether someone has something to say afterwards, imo. (Though I'm glad people started engaging over time here obviously). Especially for older hidden gems on the site. I often feel like I've found buried treasure, discovering a story written a decade ago here with no comments.

6/23/23, 12:30 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) It’s actually, to me, less about quality and more about the desire to see my work as _seen_. When I get a comment I’m most excited when it notices things I was attempting to communicate. I see my art as successful when it gets across what I was trying to get across. Comments tell me “we, the audience, we picked up what you were putting down”. If that makes sense!
6/22/23, 9:11 AM
I agree that the drawing out of desire is one of the hottest things I find in erotica; after all, poor men, the aftereffects of orgasm are generally needing to _stop_ having all that fun for a bit while you recharge. Which makes the effects of this world all the more fun since the act of fucking often makes men in this world just want more. I honestly don't know if I'd like living in a world exactly like this or not, but I sure the hell love reading about it. I'm not sure what it is about me that likes roles so much too, but having a world where men have different sexual powers is just so fun to me. I will admit, I think the passive nature of frat bottoms here until the Sirens were introduced was overlooking just how powerful a good bottom can be, so I'm glad to see them show up!

6/22/23, 3:43 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Hah, I’ve had friends of mine agree that they’re not 100% sure they’d want to live here, but that damn it would be hot—it’s a lot! So constantly hypersexual, with little respite on the intensity, and you often just go from one orgasm to the next. Arik just came inside Raavi and now Talley’s trying to get him in a Rut that he can’t stop? It’s one sex scene after another. Oh yeah, the roles are a lot of fun; they really spice things up even if not everyone has one. Glad you liked Sirens, and trust me—I’m aware of the power of a good bottom, and as frat bottoms unfold in this story, you’ll see them get a lot of love for what they can do. Chapter 8, which I’ll be releasing soon, is the first look into that idea.