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EJG
7/2/23, 9:47 PM
A lot of folks are probably edging on Tanners comeuppance,but a dark soul deep in me want's evil to win.It's pure fantasy after all,and good endings don't always ahppen in real life. I kinda felt the debauched side of the Russo's was hot,and hoped 'good ol' big brother Sam' could actually give in the to evil.Oh,the horrors some of you may think..Anyhoo,it's the authors story.Lets mould and guide it his way and his ending.
7/2/23, 8:16 AM
Awesome! I checked back a few times a day for this update, and it did NOT disappoint. I love how you can see the laziness and joy of gaining spreading throughout the base. You also do a great job setting up the different body types of the characters, and how Will and Connor are going to be holdouts from the changes (they don't eat in the mess hall and avoid the snack bars, which seem to be the keys to packing on the pounds). I can't wait to see all of these cute guys get nice and plump!

7/2/23, 2:12 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Aaah Thanks, I really appreciate this comment! I hope you enjoy more of the story in the following weeks
7/2/23, 7:11 AM
The growth will soon accelerate I imagine. With a name similar to Celsius they may be creating big ball bellied bears who can handle the cold. Just a guess.

7/2/23, 2:11 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Its a slow burn deal but yes, with most of the cast presented we can start the gains 😜
7/2/23, 3:34 AM
Love this story! It’s super hot, a lot of fun and I can’t wait to see what happens next - AND WE GET A THROUPLE ROMANCE!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!
7/1/23, 3:34 PM
HOT Chapter, Supaboi! Def like the new direction of the last 2 chapters.... Can't wait to see what happens next!
6/30/23, 9:50 PM
It took me a very long time to catch up to the more recent stuff, and it was very nice to see the evolution of your style. The story also went in many funny directions. 😍 I do have a problem with your overuse of capital letters, but this seems to have calmed down in recent chapters.

7/1/23, 3:24 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks, Bobby!! Appreciate ALL of your comments!! My overall style continues to be "a work in progress", but hearing comments from you are certainly helpful "to hone in on my shortcomings"... I had been utilizing the capital letters mainly to demonstrate "moments of anger/domination/strength".... but I will keep your comment in mind for future chapters/stories!! Super GR8FUL that you're diggin the storyline & hope you enjoy the next chapter (which is currently in review)!! Happy 4th!:firecracker:
7/1/23, 2:46 PM
Part 2? Please 🙏
7/1/23, 1:09 PM
I really have to agree -- the sex scenes are sweet and so sex-positive, and I really love that. They're also intensely erotic, which I think is an accomplishment. I liked the tie-in to the larger Priapist/Consummation universe world you create elsewhere!
7/1/23, 11:06 AM
That was such an enormous pleasure! THANK YOU
6/22/23, 5:57 PM
I really love mischievous, trickster types, and a short muscular guy is a real turn-on for me, so I love Talley, and I love that he's a dominant vers! He really does say "fuck you" even to such a universe as Consummation, defying his role to do what he loves, while still loving his role as well. Honestly, that's a pretty complex character compared to our usual erotic characters! I do think it's somewhat interesting that for as much as the name of the series is about the Prince, when he features, he's almost always being drug one way or another by his dick! Find some agency, Ariel/Arik!

7/1/23, 1:03 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Yeah, I love writing Talley, he goes so wild with whatever he does and it's hard not to let him take control when he exudes dominance the way he does. Role-wise, it's definitely been tough for Talley to balance both the role thrust on him by his powers and his own dominant preferences. More on that in Top Maker, but it'll show up in different ways here in P&FB as well. I appreciate your insight into Arik—what's happening to him will develop in complexity over the next few chapters, and I'm looking forward to drawing out his dilemma.