Recent Comments

7/10/23, 4:38 AM
I'm glad that Liam and Mason end up together without help from any magical being. I hope we.get to see more of Dakhoz in the future.

7/10/23, 5:45 AM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) Glad you liked it. Dakhoz May return.
7/10/23, 4:55 AM
What a fantastic chapter. I'm usually the type who tells themselves they appreciate good writing and then ends up skipping through the dialogue to get to the smut, but these narrative interludes were so charming and the exploration of djinn is so interesting that I found myself reading the entire thing. This series is a credit to the genre and I'm really looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing your work!
7/10/23, 3:22 AM
A very sweet ending.

7/10/23, 3:30 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Glad you liked it.
7/10/23, 12:06 AM
Wow, wow, wow. The worldbuilding, the djinn dialogue, the hot hot tension between them, the emotional tenderness... This is a standout series. Thanks very much for sharing your work.
7/9/23, 8:13 AM
Awesome new chapter! I love how you've put some genuine humanity into the characters (Daniel feeling lost without his twin to hang out with particularly stands out)--yes, the descriptions of everyone getting plumper is hot, but it's also fun to see character development and connect with the people we're reading about. Also love how you show the addictive quality of the food through Carlos, and how just a few bites is enough to get people hooked--and hungry. ;p Can't wait to see the guys continue to get fatter and lazier!

7/9/23, 1:38 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Aw thanks this comment really made my day, I’m happy to hear you like it. Get ready for more of them moving forward šŸ’š
7/8/23, 10:24 PM
The transformations have begun!

7/9/23, 1:36 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) We only grow from here 🄳
John
7/9/23, 5:12 AM
So freaking hot, not just the the interaction between Coach and Victor but the internal thoughts and monologue of Coach is incredible, the way the experience is changing him and he is ( I do not knoe how to put it in words) but just realizing what this means for him and this is potentially can be something more for him!
7/9/23, 4:24 AM
(and I do get that it's going to be an anthology, so maybe no more Patrick and Sean, but you certainly left plenty of room to expand that individual story if you want.)

7/9/23, 4:26 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I am actually working on the next part of this story... I'll just hold off on posting Fracture: Remanufactured for a little while. The catch is that while I had the main story segments plotted out well in advance continuing this wasn't really on my agenda but it's been pretty popular.
7/9/23, 4:21 AM
Oh, this is filled with so much damn promise. It's intricately plotted, a delightful slow burn, and hits so many of my own erotic buttons. I dearly hope you keep going with this. You'll have at least one guaranteed reader!
7/7/23, 3:40 PM
hot as fuck bro

7/9/23, 3:05 AM
@[ScallyPunk](/user/show/1105909) Thanks!