Recent Comments

2/23/23, 11:21 PM
I have so many thoughts on this, and what's happening. Thanks for keeping the mystery going, while still leaving really tantalizing clues everywhere. And uh, yeah. Cody at the very least had a bro crush on Allan, at least from the story he told, and was completely oblivious to it. And I'm left conflicted over whether Xander inadvertently did a good thing forcing the issue, or whether he ruined a budding slow romance. Gotta say, as sexy as Xander is, he's a real dick, too.

7/13/23, 10:34 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Hmmm... That's true but what did you think of him in part 6?
7/13/23, 6:54 PM
I love that its not a traditional dom/sub relationship, like there hierarchy there but its not all about the pleasure of the dom and they both seem to equally be into it and it seems alot more casual/fun

7/13/23, 10:31 PM
@[Bunny0Boi](/user/show/10021832) Thank you I thought it was fun to play around with the typical power dynamics. I hope you keep enjoying the rest of the series which I'm still working on actually. 😊
2/23/23, 8:58 PM
I am so glad I finally figured out how to use the search feature to find your stories ;-) this is great, and I don't normally get into high school stories much. But your ability to make characters come alive and paint them so well is fantastic.

7/13/23, 10:30 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Oh I'm very flattered that you went looking for my stories. An easy way is actually to go to the author's page there's a link to everything they've written on every author's page. https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/listSeries/263497
7/10/23, 12:47 PM
Oh wow what a nice ending. But im just confuse if Mason really like Liam from the beginning or its just a side effect of the reset. Like the grandfather or something made sure the reset make Mason Bi. I mean its obv the reset affected the 4 bullies. Anyway love the open ending, but if theres spinoff or continuation, Warner better not involved Mason and Liam.

7/10/23, 1:36 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I agree. I think that another Dakhoz story should include other people. A prequel can be an interesting choice, but either way I think it's best to leave Liam and Mason's story complete, as it is now.

7/10/23, 4:04 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Sorry for the confusion! My intention was that Liam didn’t need the label maker all along and Mason was and is bisexual. Liam and Mason are complete now and their story with the label maker ends here.

7/10/23, 4:04 PM
@Reader Such good options!

7/10/23, 4:16 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Now im curious, if the reset didnt affect Mason, what about the 4 bullies? Are they the one who changed, or Liam just misinterpreted things?

7/10/23, 5:43 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Mason wasn't change; the bullies were changed. While it was a reset, it wasn't a true reset as reality now remembers Liam as a jock bodied creative writer and the bullies became tolerant.

7/11/23, 4:31 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) About Liam's body, did he get younger once again while returning his jock body, or did it still cost him his age/something else?

7/11/23, 1:35 PM
@Reader Liam got younger but kept his jock body. The cost was giving up the power of the djinn to get what he wanted. Sort of a boon if you will.

7/13/23, 7:57 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Honestly seems like he got the best of both worlds. Especially since the label maker takes away years of your life and practically kills people. That's another reason I don't want the next story to revolve around Liam and Mason, the will happy ending stay a happy ending

7/13/23, 12:27 PM
@Reader It’s part of the happy ending. That Liam got everything he wanted and more. If I do another, Liam and Mason will not be involved.
Mr. Greenwood
7/13/23, 9:30 AM
The way you weave words together is pure magic Neiotik. Congratulations on creating such a captivating and original piece in the genre of "gay merman fiction". I want to read everything from you after this one :)
Mr. Greenwood
7/13/23, 9:21 AM
Hi Neiotik, I think you've truly captured the essence of the Slavic mythology, the Ivan Kupala night and such mysterious merman myth in your writing. Your story is so beautifully written and I liked that you chose a happy ending to it. Though if I was writing this story myself, I think it would end up really dramatic:laughing: I really enjoyed reading your story a lot as I do enjoy myths and legends so much. Plus the sensual details of the two lovers making love despite their difference was :fire: I would definitely recommend your story to those readers who like both romance and sensuality with such a measured and cultivated blend. Well done!
7/12/23, 6:05 PM
Please continue
Anonymous
7/12/23, 9:23 AM
Please when is the next chapter coming, we've been peaking for a year watching and waiting??? Love the work but want to see what happens next.
7/12/23, 1:49 AM
Interesting premise. This was really well done.
7/11/23, 10:22 PM
Great story. I hope there will be more gayme sessions. With new characters too. Misspelling was deliberate.