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7/18/23, 11:51 AM
Coming late to this party, but what a party! Being a bottom that loves nothing much that being overwhelmed by dicks and tops, *and* being secretly a sucker for happy stories of human hearts, I’ve been more than fulfilled by your blessed gift to us all. So many thanks for sharing this making story with us!
7/17/23, 10:39 PM
I loved this -- the journey for Talley, the descriptions of Riki and Mads, his first orgy as a bottom, the continued exploration of Consummation and the pantheon. It's honestly a bit of a privilege to be able to read this stuff as you build it up, because it's got real literary merit. I appreciate your talent!
7/17/23, 4:02 AM
Another week, another amazing chapter! It's been a while since I've so looked forward to checking for updates every day. I particularly love how you're balancing the wonderful weight gain with a "social contagion" factor (people slowly being drawn into the gaining fold, so quietly you don't even realize it's happening), along with some genuinely big questions about responsibility, the fear of being named a "narc" (which comes up in a LOT of work spaces), and even algorithm learning. It's a great series, and it has one of my favorite kinks--all of it is fantastic! Well done. :D Oh, and for what I hope to see next: I'd love to see the point of view of someone actually being drawn into the experiment--seeing how their minds work as they justify why they're gaining weight and eating more and more. But whatever you write will surely be great! :)

7/17/23, 2:49 PM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thanks! This was so sweet. It means the world to me to see people enjoy the story so far. And the following chapters might include what you look for ;)
Anonymous
7/17/23, 1:03 PM
Hot stuff. I have to say.Hope he becomes the college cum dump.? All those horny teens need a mouth....or an arse,to get off
mic
7/17/23, 10:13 AM
fucking great story, please more dumb jock roommates and getting stuck in positions. great work
7/17/23, 4:45 AM
there isn't actually anything in here about names? adjectives, arguably nicknames, but no _names_. there is nothing about the power of names and no "nominative determinism" going on in this story. maybe that's pedantic criticism, but honestly it seems like you had something already written, slapped a title onto it that relates to the contest tyne but not the story, and uploaded it just for the sake of participating.
6/30/23, 10:25 PM
I don't know that I've read an actual realization moment in this site that was so realistically portrayed (as opposed to forced by transformation or coercion), and it was very sweet. Well done.

7/17/23, 3:35 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Well, this is one of the first fics published on GayCupidStories, so I'm not exactly surprised that this is one of the first realistic 'realisations'—it just wasn't the typical _oeuvre_ of Spiral, I'm sure. But I tried my best, and I'm pleased with how it came out (heh). Although most of my stories involve characters who are already certain that they're gay, I care a lot about the theme of self-discovery, so writing this well was important to me.
6/23/23, 4:59 PM
Wow, that was so incredibly sweet, and yet managed to veer away from saccharine, with the help of an almost literal cum geyser at the end. Delightful, funny, and a sweet love story with differentiated characters. Very well done!

7/17/23, 3:32 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) The fact that it started as a simple "guy goes back in time to get a girl, wakes up with a husband about to top the absolute shit out of him" probably has a bit to do with the wicked turn it takes at the end! But a lot of evolution and many surprises to me went into making it something I could consider beautiful, and not just decadently sexual. I'm glad you found it sweet.
7/16/23, 11:54 PM
Ngl, I would be very happy with a part two.
7/16/23, 8:24 PM
Holy shit. This was PHENOMINAL. More, please!!!