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Aug 2, 2023
8/2/23, 4:38 PM
This was done very well with how very hot guy was oblivious to the reality changes even tho he knew about the program and all.
Aug 2, 2023
Nutiper
8/2/23, 4:20 PM
I love this story. I revisited it a ton when it was first posted to Tumblr — it's really good to see it here too! And heck, if I'd had a muscled-up big-dicked reality-warping roommate like Jin-woo, college would have been way more fun! (Though I probably wouldn't have gotten much studying done...)
Aug 2, 2023
8/2/23, 2:31 PM
A great story. You work has only improved since then.
8/2/23, 7:12 AM
This was very hot, I always love diversity and representation in porn and it was great imagining more than just a typical white guy. The final sex scene felt like it was what I was waiting for, and it was super sexy.
8/1/23, 10:51 PM
I love pecs, so this was a great addition to the story! The only thing that could have made it even better would have been some lactation, but who am I to complain?
7/30/23, 9:52 PM
Oh good LORD, what an ENDING! I’m a sucker for sweet stories about love, and watching Will and Connor confess their feelings is so cute. And yet you did a great job providing a sinister undercurrent: love or not, they’ve still been brainwashed into being into gaining and laziness. Was the love always there, or is it a result of the experiment? Or does it matter? That IS a _riddle_, isn’t it… Also, the scene where all of the guys join together and feast has that similar dichotomy: joy at them being reunited, but also sinister in the fact that they were hypnotized to have totally different personalities. Amazing! In addition to a big fat epilogue, it would be cool to hear a detail that the plan has been working in other countries—a sign that the experiment was a success. Congratulations on your incredible story! :)

8/1/23, 2:31 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Yeees the dubious nature of all relationships was an interesting concept I wanted to tackle, that and the guilt if enabling or interfering in peoples relations. Im happy you liked it 💚
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/30/23, 6:53 PM
Sorry to see the story end. I always enjoy reading about in-shape straight men becoming fat, over-indulgent gay pigs! But it was a good ending, nonetheless.

8/1/23, 2:29 AM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com Thanks for the comments, Im thinking about expanding the story outside of camp but we will see hehe there is always more guys to corrupt
8/1/23, 12:06 AM
Your world-building, even on a small.scale, is great, Cockatrice. The attention to detail you put into everything, and the way you use dialog between characters to talk it out, is always intriguing.
7/31/23, 9:08 PM
This was beautifully written. I loved the showcasing of how seemingly small moments can hit us hard as kids. I remember my dad once telling me that boys didn't button their shirts from the bottom, only girls did. He always had phrases like that. I did it because I'd sometimes get the buttons lopsided if I did it from the top, but it was always making me think of if I was doing things "wrong" as a boy. I told my dad about this decades later and he was baffled at his own comment. We don't even think about this stuff and how it impacts our psyche. But I think you carried that well. In fact, this was so beautifully done for the toxic masculinity part that the romance bits and your usual merging thing kinda felt tacked on -- not because they were bad, they were fine -- but because they didn't much hit with the same flair as the larger theme. Anyway. This wasn't really erotica, but it was amazing to me.
7/31/23, 5:39 PM
> “He’s not a bum!” > “No” Sean confirms. “Quite the opposite." Ok, that got me. I giggled my head off!