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Oct 27, 2023
10/28/23, 9:58 AM
This was very hot.

10/28/23, 1:30 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Glad you liked it! Kind of a fantasy of mine (duh, right?). One day....
Nutiper
10/27/23, 5:11 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter! It's fun, and hot, and I love all the different character dynamics too. I do wonder if it might be worth working with a proofreader to add in more paragraph breaks to make it easier to read on a screen? It's a fantastic first chapter, and it'd be a shame if not as many people read it just because they're struggling with the run-on paragraphs... But yeah, I really like the story so far, and am looking forward to reading more!

Anonymous
10/28/23, 1:28 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Thank you for the feedback! That’s definitely something I will work on with the next chapter
Oct 27, 2023
10/27/23, 9:42 PM
Great story! Quick and dirty with an excellent twist. Well done.

10/27/23, 10:41 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thank you! I really appreciate it. Let me know if there's a storyline you'd like to see -- love working for approval ;)
10/27/23, 1:23 PM
I liked this story, it was well written and toxic masculinity is an important topic to be talked about. I liked the little episodes of Andrew's childhood, the bit about the toy was my favourite but I could relate to the scraped knee one most. I was a little confused about the constant references to the temperature. Was this an attempt to tie back to the idea of warmth in "warm summer rain" and how it isn't so bad? Also justice for Sergio 🥺

10/27/23, 1:34 PM
@[A Possession A Day](/user/show/1060663) I just wanted to keep the fact that it is summer in the reader's mind, hence why it was mentioned multiple times. In a medium without visuals, it's a bit tricky to keep certain details alive as the story progresses. Afterall, it is kind of relevant to the ending scene. If it was a cold shower, it would probably be more uncomfortable. But it was specifically supposed to be not a big deal.
10/27/23, 1:53 AM
This was really lovely and intriguing -- I'm wondering, has it not been continued yet, or can I find the continuation elsewhere? I'm always delighted when I stumble upon a new story from you that I somehow missed when I obsessively went through your story list the first time.
10/25/23, 3:16 PM
Ooh thinga are getting interesting. Love the build up for his discovery/acceptance. And i find it interesting how fast his thought of converting his entourage and friends to be a part of his harem. Lol he works fast.
10/24/23, 4:09 PM
I saw the title and I just had to read it. And it turned out to be way hotter than I was expecting. Outstanding work, honestly.

10/25/23, 12:22 AM
@[Wishful Thinking](/user/show/958307) I can see why! We'll chalk it up to coincidence! :wink: Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed!
Anonymous
10/24/23, 11:58 PM
Any thoughts on when another chapter might drop? Please!
10/24/23, 8:55 AM
So intriguing!
Anonymous
10/23/23, 1:48 AM
This was great!! I’d love to see the next part. When he goes home and pulls his hunky father aside to help him with something upstairs in his room. His mom asks if he’s alright concerned but he just looks down at his daddies fat bulge and his hole twitches excitedly at the knowledge of it being stretched and fucked hard by his father’s fat cock. He leans in to kiss his mom’s cheek as his hand reaches down and grabs his daddies package and grasps it softly. His dad jumps back a little but lets his boys hand stay there