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7/11/23, 9:35 PM
I love me a good cuddle, so Riki really has a soft spot with me in this story!

10/30/23, 3:57 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Yeah, sitting in a big soft lap like his is just such a dream. And his embrace is perfect to welcome Talley into something that's so completely new to him.
10/28/23, 4:51 PM
Another great chapter, Colin! Would love to read more Potato family escapades. There's one more brother, after all :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

10/30/23, 2:24 PM
@[StormRaven1217](/user/show/10039204) Yeah! Don't think I'm done with the potato farmers, lol Just posted a new story for the Halloween challenge - if you're curious about horny zombies, check it out ;)
10/26/23, 2:47 PM
I'm glad to see Mason get his turn at being Kol's bitch for the night and really learning that his place is under a man. :wink: This chapter was everything I'd hoped for after the last one and more, especially with Mason becoming personally responsible for some of the deliveries.

10/30/23, 2:23 PM
@[grkotter91](/user/show/10016610) Thanks! I enjoyed this arc of Kol's. Just posted a new story for the Halloween theme - zombies!
10/30/23, 1:43 PM
Talk about cold opens, this was a hot open if I ever saw one! The dream was a clever way to give us a taste of intense sex without sacrificing the build-up it deserves. You’ve done a great job with the character dynamics, and the world _almost_ seems like it could be real—except maaaybe for the moment when Apollo ‘comes out’ as a ‘hungry bottom’ to his coach. But gods was it worth it for the moment when Coach Barrett’s tip teases Apollo’s hole. Looking forward to more!
10/29/23, 8:48 PM
The transformation where realy nice...
Anonymous
10/29/23, 1:19 AM
This is so hot!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Aug 25, 2023
Toevah
8/27/23, 9:50 AM
Your stories are a rare pleasure. They really remind me of Raymond Carver’s

10/28/23, 1:34 PM
@Toevah Wow! Thank you, Toevah! This made my day.
Oct 27, 2023
10/28/23, 9:58 AM
This was very hot.

10/28/23, 1:30 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Glad you liked it! Kind of a fantasy of mine (duh, right?). One day....
Nutiper
10/27/23, 5:11 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter! It's fun, and hot, and I love all the different character dynamics too. I do wonder if it might be worth working with a proofreader to add in more paragraph breaks to make it easier to read on a screen? It's a fantastic first chapter, and it'd be a shame if not as many people read it just because they're struggling with the run-on paragraphs... But yeah, I really like the story so far, and am looking forward to reading more!

Anonymous
10/28/23, 1:28 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Thank you for the feedback! That’s definitely something I will work on with the next chapter
Oct 27, 2023
10/27/23, 9:42 PM
Great story! Quick and dirty with an excellent twist. Well done.

10/27/23, 10:41 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thank you! I really appreciate it. Let me know if there's a storyline you'd like to see -- love working for approval ;)