Recent Comments

11/11/23, 9:52 AM
A wonderful start to this story! You've created a fascinating world. An anthology series is a fun choice, you could always circle back to the characters. Looking forward to reading more chapters for sure!

11/11/23, 2:49 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Yeah that anthology concept is now going to be side stories I guess because... Well you'll see.
11/10/23, 10:23 PM
They're getting bolder! I really love how okay they are with it all and just enjoying each other's exhibitionist tendencies and the orgasms they give one another. The dirty talk was also hot. They're working themselves up with what the passers-by would see. Another great chapter.
11/10/23, 9:39 PM
Awesome chapter. I really love the development of their relationship and how the cam shows are helping to push their boundaries and bring them closer. Their exhibitionism and horniness helping them explore with each other is really hot! Thanks for another chapter in this series.
Mark H
11/10/23, 4:35 PM
Brilliant! Kept my attention from the first paragraph. I’m blown away. I’ll say it again - brilliant. You have wonderful insight into the psychology of the minds of gay men. Don’t stop writing/creating. Thank you for creating this story. I never comment, but I couldn’t not this time.

11/10/23, 6:27 PM
@Mark H Thank you so much. What a great comment. I hope you continue to enjoy this story.
11/10/23, 2:01 AM
Oh i am very much enjoying this. Please continue
11/9/23, 2:50 AM
Is there any reason why Will and Jayson can't take turns? Strike a new deal, where they alternate who's in control?
11/9/23, 1:48 AM
Very interesting plot twist. And very hot mind control scene.
11/9/23, 12:54 AM
Thanks for letting me know!!
11/9/23, 12:48 AM
I have not! Somehow missed that you'd written one!

11/9/23, 12:52 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Oh well the full novel version of The Reindeer Clause is on Amazon, under my pseudonym Scott Woodruff. It's currently on sale both kindle and paperback. The one story segment that's still on here is the original prologue (which got cut down and made less dark in the novel version).
11/3/23, 6:33 PM
Look, I know you had an idea for this as a whole anthology series, but I'm not sure you quite know what you have in the Sean and Patrick story. I'm not sure I can get it across. It is lightning, captured. It's an entire possibility of a novel in what is currently a short story. It is quite simply some of the best work you've ever done, and I am a raving fanboi of your other stories. There is so much more of this particular story to tell, and you will do yourself a real disservice if you completely abandon it for the rest of your anthologies. I'm not asking that you continue right now, but don't limit yourself. Keep this open as something to come back to someday. It deserves it, and you do too.

11/3/23, 6:49 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Yeah, the novel vibe very quickly came on. Additionally at least one of the segments I had planned for the anthology is tonally a very bad match now. It was fine when there was only the first part of this story written, but I'm doing a lot of reconsidering. Now it feels like instead of a Black Mirror type anthology, it's more of a big sci-fi thriller and some of the plot lines are just happening in a different place and the characters in this narrative line are just unaware of the details. I can tell you that I may not be able to release an entire book here but I will release what I think is a satisfying amount of material and then probably make a novel later out of it. I can't explain too much without spoiling everything but trust that I have a lot of stuff planned. Like I plotted out the first part of this series about 5 years ago so it's been incubating for quite a while.

11/9/23, 12:19 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) You... have read my book, right?