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11/11/23, 11:30 PM
Another edit! This chapter really starts to bring things together on the Coin side of the narrative. The way the doctor locked the door suggests it's not unusual for new pets to try to do a runner or be apprehensive. There's a palpable disconnect between Rhys's excitement and normalcy in the process for his registering a new pet who he's excited to have, and Jasper's lack of options and going down that rabbit hole as a best-case for the situation. The world's eager pet culture and how it doesn't shy away from sexuality really fascinates me. That a doctor's visit could be so intimate, to the point of mapping bodies to make customised toys to fit. It's a natural implementation of their advanced technology and their hyper-sexual desires. Teasing a new pet mid-appointment. I enjoyed the calming of our dear Jasper to let him take in some of the 'culture' of it. Very sexy scene in the doctor's office. I really love the way you combine sex and sexiness with character development. Especially the little moments where Jasper and Rhys connect some more. Whether or not that's also a side effect of Aris's conditioning. Allowing Jasper a break and supporting him is really sweet. Looking forward to the re-post of chapter 4 in the (near?) future.
11/11/23, 10:57 PM
Heartwarming story!
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 10:21 PM
Great story! I'm glad they changed each other not just one of them.
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 8:08 PM
I loved this story. It was sweet how they end up together and communicating and running changes by one another -- to a degree. It's not going to be long before they're going to need to change their stamina to keep up with that insatiable libido and constantly full balls needing to unload in their favourite place. Thank you for posting. I hope they're very happy together.
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 6:53 PM
This was adorable and had very good execution. I really like how the things that were already true stayed in the book; it was a good example of the theme of "perception vs reality".
11/11/23, 9:52 AM
A wonderful start to this story! You've created a fascinating world. An anthology series is a fun choice, you could always circle back to the characters. Looking forward to reading more chapters for sure!

11/11/23, 2:49 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Yeah that anthology concept is now going to be side stories I guess because... Well you'll see.
11/10/23, 10:23 PM
They're getting bolder! I really love how okay they are with it all and just enjoying each other's exhibitionist tendencies and the orgasms they give one another. The dirty talk was also hot. They're working themselves up with what the passers-by would see. Another great chapter.
11/10/23, 9:39 PM
Awesome chapter. I really love the development of their relationship and how the cam shows are helping to push their boundaries and bring them closer. Their exhibitionism and horniness helping them explore with each other is really hot! Thanks for another chapter in this series.
Mark H
11/10/23, 4:35 PM
Brilliant! Kept my attention from the first paragraph. I’m blown away. I’ll say it again - brilliant. You have wonderful insight into the psychology of the minds of gay men. Don’t stop writing/creating. Thank you for creating this story. I never comment, but I couldn’t not this time.

11/10/23, 6:27 PM
@Mark H Thank you so much. What a great comment. I hope you continue to enjoy this story.
11/10/23, 2:01 AM
Oh i am very much enjoying this. Please continue