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3/9/24, 12:24 AM
i won't lie, the very opening line of this immediately turned me off. "It was a dark and stormy night because of course it was. This is a vaguely ~~horror themed Halloween~~ science themed competition erotic mind control story, what other kind of night was it going to take place on?" a little humor is fine in erotic stories but the narrator undercutting the entire premise from the very start, and a hackneyed old dark and stormy night joke too? did not give me high hopes for the rest.
3/8/24, 11:50 PM
I would love to read more from you! Especially more father son love stuff.
3/8/24, 5:26 PM
so beautiful. the intimacy is just heaven-sent. WELL WRITTEN work. THANK YOU
3/8/24, 6:32 AM
Great story!
3/8/24, 4:28 AM
OMG i love this chapter. So hot. And i love that Brad is such a hungry hungry slut bottom. I hope this is not the last time we see Ethan. Maybe we could add his boyfriend and make it a threesome. Anyway, looking forward the next chapter.
Anonymous
3/8/24, 12:58 AM
Very well written story. 10/10. Eager for more!!
3/7/24, 11:43 AM
Fucking hot - please continue!

3/7/24, 8:02 PM
@[DorothyZbornak](/user/show/977065) Great username! haha! 😂
3/7/24, 6:56 PM
What a fun story. THANK YOU
3/7/24, 6:01 PM
WoW! Great story! Can't wait to read more and see where it grows! 😈
3/7/24, 3:16 PM
Fuck this was amazing. Hoping that we get another scene later with Brad and Ethan when brads back in his own body. Seems like Ethan knows something about getting Brad to accidentally cast magic on himself... Maybe to make him gay when he returns hehe