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12/4/23, 1:48 AM
Did a little mini-edit just to spruce it up a bit and fix some minor errors; will likely come back and do it again before getting onto the next chapter.
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11/12/23, 9:42 PM
Damn, This dark perversion is so hot.So good to be bad in a fantasy world.

12/3/23, 11:45 PM
@Anonymous Agreed...I've been contemplating even more how I'd write a continuation of the 'good' ending too. See what a loving Peter/Blake relationship looks like while they are haunting down Jiang and getting a chance to catch up with the other fathers/brothers in their new loving dynamics.
12/3/23, 11:42 PM
Another amazing addition into the JPS world, Charlie! Good work and I can't wait to see where this one goes!
12/3/23, 4:02 PM
Amazing and super hot story as always. Congrats!
11/28/23, 11:32 PM
Wonderful story!

12/3/23, 3:48 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Glad you enjoyed it!
9/23/23, 7:17 AM
Love this story! There's so many things I would like to say about it that are positive. The description of the muscles and growth, the tension and build up, the Romantic climax! All of it was beautifully done! The only thing I wish was different, is I don't think the post transformation pictures do these muscle Bulls Justice. But, I still loved being able to see what these guys look like, it really helped with the visual aids.

12/3/23, 3:45 PM
@[darkluster4](/user/show/10001301) I'm so glad you loved it! I had a lot of fun writing out the muscle growth and transformation scenes—especially, funny enough, the one that happened over a phone call. I love me some romantic tension with the plot tension, and I'm glad I was able to weave it together. Honestly, I think you're right about the images! I'm thinking of moving to a model where I link "cast inspiration" pics, but don't actually embed them in the story. Then I can (1) have multiple models that inspired me, but also (2) don't have to force the readers to imagine these characters in a specific way. I'll probably update this soon.
12/3/23, 1:16 PM
I really enjoyed this, I hope to see Richard and Luke’s relationship develop further!
12/3/23, 3:46 AM
So is this story already finished before it begins.
12/3/23, 2:29 AM
Another rework! Another successful tightening of events and using what you've built of the world in the future to inform past chapters. Particular representing the lewd, hypersexual nature of pets and Coins and how normal it is. I also love the introduction of some of Aris's pets earlier to ease Jasper into their personalities when he'll inevitably run into them. Oree remains a strong favourite. I love how you write them. So effortlessly charming and seductive. The integrity of the doctor was a nice touch, and Jasper's cunning to answer the question in a way that reduced concerns. Can't wait for chapter 5.
12/2/23, 10:21 PM
You should do a story where Jason hypnotizes Tim.