Recent Comments

1/1/24, 10:44 AM
Only discovering your series today and loving it! Your characters are great, and the scenes are uber sexy. I’m as hooked as a bearer inhaling Russell’s cock!
Anonymous
12/31/23, 11:18 PM
Please let the dad fuck him in the next chapter? Or have him go to his uncle’s house and get fucked by him.. the dad walks in on them and pulls out his cock
Dec 21, 2023
12/31/23, 7:50 AM
I couldn't wait! I downloaded the whole story and had trouble putting it down. I love transformations in which either a character or relationships develop under some form of pressure or control. My strongest personal fetish involves some form of D/s seduction. I also like stories that end happily, though I also happily accept the occasional situation in which a really nasty evil unforgivable character gets his dire comeupance. Your story happily twisted all my norms around to the point where I finally thought I was the one to get the comeupance. Regardless of who did what to, with, and/or for whom, I think the story is incredibly hot and I expect I will read it again soon. The chapters you chose to represent the book worked well to represent the concept and fire up the imagination. Thanks so much for a wonderful read! [I found writing this comment a little tricky as I didn't want to give anything away to a new reader (other than the excitement to go buy the book), but still wanted to write something reasonably understandable to @absman420 and others who have read the whole book. Would love to chat more about the last chapter or two, but that might spoil the last twist.]

12/31/23, 1:11 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for this review -- please consider copy/pasting it over to Amazon! You've given me a chance to talk about form, which I love -- writer geek stuff ahead. THE IMPLANT is written in the form of a Five-Act Tragedy (ala Shakespeare etal) When I first conceptualized it, I "saw" the story as a three-act with an epilogue, but when I started writing, the 2nd Act just grew and grew until finally, I broke it into two separate acts -- so the work became a four-act with an epilogue, which didn't feel right to me, either, so I expanded the epilogue into a full act. Looking at the 5-act tragedy structure, the climax happens at the end of Act 3 (as mine did), falling action in Act 4 (which still implies forward motion, just fallout from the climax) and then Act 5, Tragedy, the horrific outcomes. I threw a little anti-climax into Act 4 -- just for fun -- but readers who are unused to the 5-Act form didn't understand that the end of Act 3 is the dramatic climax, not the end of Act 4, so they've felt "cheated" by the end of Act 4. I get that. If you ever read it again, read it with that in mind -- the fervor that got you to the end of the 3rd act (The Twin's Party and subsequent action) will hopefully read a little differently. Please feel free to DM on the Forum, or on Twitter or Threads to chat about the last few chapters.
12/31/23, 5:24 AM
Hot story and set up.
Arpágonu
12/26/23, 4:01 PM
Very interesting, a calmer chapter. It doesn't have the action that was seen in the previous parts but it is equally incredible. A more sensual and erotic part of the story, where Tucker's manipulative personality is perfectly exemplified. Even so, the chapter left me a little dull, perhaps due to the lack of movement, that's why I'm impatiently waiting for the next part, I hope it doesn't take long.

12/26/23, 6:09 PM
@[Arpágonu](/user/show/2723721) Thanks for the feedback. It was kind of intentional because I was introducing a new character, so it felt better to bring things back down before letting them go back up to a boil. That's also why I wanted to put this part up on GayCupidStories as well because it includes sensual dynamics. Hopefully the next chapter will be closer to your liking.

Arpágonu
12/30/23, 12:00 PM
@[Landers](/user/show/429288) Please don't get me wrong, I didn't mean to give a negative review. The thing is that all the chapters were very active before this one and now there was a small drop, which is normal to introduce a new character, but it cut off our adrenaline tap so to speak. I don't think anyone intended to give a negative review of your work, it's quite the opposite.

12/31/23, 12:39 AM
@[Arpágonu](/user/show/2723721) I don't really consider it negative, as constructive feedback is a good thing. Looking back, I agree there were some things that I could have added to make it a little more active to keep the same pace as the previous chapters. I'm also flattered you care enough to comment, so thank you. :)
12/28/23, 8:26 PM
Oh, so I thought I made a comment but I guess I imagined it. Anyway, this was hot and sexy. Love the dom top breeder POV and how 'easy' it seems he can turn bearers into subby needy good boys. Lots of fun and sexy times to be had here and I hope he continues to be in charge and dominant. So yeah fun stuff.

Digital Dalliance
12/30/23, 10:33 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I appreciate all of the comments, Heru. And you'll have to wait and see what happens to them! ;)
12/29/23, 11:32 PM
Love seeing a straight guy get dumbed down to a gay slut.
12/28/23, 6:30 PM
Amazing chapter, though i have to agree with the above - it is a bit dull on the action, but very understandable why you decided to do so on this chapter. I do wanted to ask if Tucker has some other powers (i.e possessing two people at the same time)? That could make the story a bit more intense and interesting.

12/29/23, 11:06 PM
@[VenomControl](/user/show/538660) Currently he does have other powers, but doesn't have the powers to possess two people at the same time. I am working on another story about a hive mind where that kind of thing does happen though. I will work on adding more action to the next chapter. Hopefully it is more satisfying.
12/29/23, 6:29 PM
I’d love to see the coach or even the dad lock the cumdump’s cock on a chastity cage and fuck him until he cums soft and untouched
12/22/23, 9:08 PM
Great use of contrasts to show how thoroughly Frank conquered Luke. The contrast between Luke’s and Frank’s bodies is expertly done along with the contrast between Luke’s humiliation and arousal. The suspense is also good. You keep us guessing as to how much of Frank’s power over Luke are natural and how much they are induced pharmaceutically (in the power of his cock) and hypnotically or pharmaceutically (in Frank’s power over Luke’s mind).

12/29/23, 8:12 AM
@[Evan14](/user/show/10043950) thanks! glad you enjoyed it. the final chapter is just waiting for approval. Hope you enjoy it too