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Lavender Lad
1/8/24, 8:04 PM
I didn't like how too many words were just dedicated to the pov character going "hmm I saw this in my favorite gay hypno smut before" to the point of redundancy instead of using his knowledge of being in a story to his advantage, it really takes you out of the action. other than that I am really liking the idea and looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully many fluff scenes between Brad and Tony!

1/9/24, 6:46 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Fluffy, yes, but after lots of build-up And yes, the exposition of my MC is a bit jarring but I'm unironically trying to emulate light novels (at least the trashy ones) and self-insert fics. But I hope I'm gonna improve on this because plot is gonna happen next Thank you for the constructive critique :)
1/8/24, 11:18 PM
While reworked, the truth remains as Daymion pointed out. There is so much eroticism and depth to the world and the characters. The chapters pull me in whether it's actual Coins using their pets in some fashion, or with hints at how the society works and the undertones that go along with such a hypersexual culture. The build up and tease of Jasper falling into accepting that pet status -- nudged along certainly -- to be wanting it and seeing his mixed feelings about that feels really solid and I'm always eager for more of this world. Great job on the re-work. Like the chapters before, you're elevating an already great story into a tight, focused narrative for plot points and characters alike.
1/8/24, 7:15 PM
This is *fascinating*. I love seeing deconstructions like this, and I'm definitely looking forward to more.

1/8/24, 7:37 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you! I'll try my best to update regularly :)
1/8/24, 1:17 AM
Why is this not also on Cupid? Love it.

Martin
1/8/24, 5:44 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Agreed. Stories like this should be cross-posted to Cupid as well. That server always needs more love :)

1/8/24, 6:26 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) After I started writing, this story has taken quite a different direction than I anticipated - I've updated to publish it to Cupid as well.

Martin
1/8/24, 7:11 PM
@[Amero](/user/show/10014920) :thumbsup:
Hurricane
1/8/24, 6:51 PM
Love where this is going. I really enjoy the normal postings on gss, but this lends a lovely little sparkle to a wonderful "room"
1/8/24, 2:43 PM
a lovely story :) looking for the next chapter
1/8/24, 5:08 AM
Great work - looking forward to Sunday Practice. ;)
1/8/24, 3:03 AM
Love the romance aspect. As much as I hate comparing someone's fine work to a popular trend, this reminds me of _Heartstopper_. Edging for more!
Elm
1/6/24, 3:21 AM
A great start! Love your stories!
abc123
1/6/24, 12:04 AM
Loved this!