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1/9/24, 3:44 PM
This is getting my Internet more and more. And Brad finally said, "master'. Frankly I'm not sure how controlled I could keep myself if I was with a hunk like him in a leather jockstrap. Id probably think what else I could get on him.
1/6/24, 9:34 AM
Hot. Can't wait to read more.

1/9/24, 1:39 PM
@Flamefox23 Glad you enjoyed it!
1/9/24, 12:56 PM
This is so good! I love Larry and the Left Warehouse is very near and dear to my heart.

1/9/24, 1:39 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Larry is definitely a keeper! Thanks for reading.
Zander
1/9/24, 11:11 AM
I liked the chapter as well as the Main Character (I like people with brains). I'm really looking forward to the confrontation with the Doctor and the other hypnotist villains (when they all want Tony but can't do it)
Zander
1/9/24, 10:42 AM
Thank you for the story. I have been waiting for a long time for someone to write something like this. I hope the continuation of the story will not be long in coming and we will see many chapters.
1/9/24, 7:21 AM
This was hot and made me realize how much I missed these stories.
1/8/24, 10:56 PM
Fun and interesting story. Can't wait to see how it goes. Reminds me of a story on here where mc does his best not to fall for any of the hypnosis stuff.

1/9/24, 6:56 AM
@Flamefox23 I'm really inspired by my favorite authors here: Elmara (my ultimate favorite smut author in the site), Willie Cici (mostly his earlier stories centered around twunky bottoms protagonists), Nocturne13, Rotherhaman's 'Born to be Bred' series, Adonis' 'Lust's #1 Gamer' series, z119z, and gymmuscle's 'The Change' series They write really great stories here and I think I draw a LOT of inspiration from them Thank you for you kind reply :)
Lavender Lad
1/8/24, 8:04 PM
I didn't like how too many words were just dedicated to the pov character going "hmm I saw this in my favorite gay hypno smut before" to the point of redundancy instead of using his knowledge of being in a story to his advantage, it really takes you out of the action. other than that I am really liking the idea and looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully many fluff scenes between Brad and Tony!

1/9/24, 6:46 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Fluffy, yes, but after lots of build-up And yes, the exposition of my MC is a bit jarring but I'm unironically trying to emulate light novels (at least the trashy ones) and self-insert fics. But I hope I'm gonna improve on this because plot is gonna happen next Thank you for the constructive critique :)
1/8/24, 11:18 PM
While reworked, the truth remains as Daymion pointed out. There is so much eroticism and depth to the world and the characters. The chapters pull me in whether it's actual Coins using their pets in some fashion, or with hints at how the society works and the undertones that go along with such a hypersexual culture. The build up and tease of Jasper falling into accepting that pet status -- nudged along certainly -- to be wanting it and seeing his mixed feelings about that feels really solid and I'm always eager for more of this world. Great job on the re-work. Like the chapters before, you're elevating an already great story into a tight, focused narrative for plot points and characters alike.
1/8/24, 7:15 PM
This is *fascinating*. I love seeing deconstructions like this, and I'm definitely looking forward to more.

1/8/24, 7:37 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you! I'll try my best to update regularly :)