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Male-meat-suit
1/20/24, 1:20 AM
[The truth is that I imagine Jhonny like this, when Tucker is in control](https://www.tumblr.com/vareddman76/720527775891668992?source=share)

Male-meat-suit
1/20/24, 10:10 AM
@[Male-meat-suit](/user/show/10046570) Its a pic, if you click the link
1/20/24, 9:48 AM
One of my favourites chapters of any story on this site. Incredible stuff. Wish I had guy like Simon in my life haha.
Null0byte
1/20/24, 9:05 AM
I’ve found as I progress in my own relationship with my fiancé, my kink tastes are changing. While I’m still primarily into muscle/latex/robot/drone/hypnosis/mc (in no particular order), I’m discovering my preference is shifting away from the “I’m turned into a robot/drone and used/programmed” niche and gravitating to stories along those lines but with a romantic story of more partners and preferably a happy ending. And oh my, I echo the others, this is hitting all the right mental buttons and so far is simply one of the best I’ve read. The pacing is just right, not too fast, but with enough tease to make you wish there was another chapter to read. The characters feel like real people with complete lives and not caricatures and the settings are rich and alive. I can’t wait to see what they get up to with the device and how they progress as a couple.
1/20/24, 9:01 AM
Yo this story is really awesome. It actually has a good plot to it. Honestly feels like im reading a webnovel instead of a porn/erotic novel. This type of story doesnt feel like it should be in this website though. Feels more like an Archive of our own story type instead. Anyway thank you for the story, just passing by to say you are awesome and happy writing~
1/20/24, 7:04 AM
This is one of the best series currently available and it's incredible how quickly things escalate without sounding rushed. This is a demonstration of good writing. I'm very interested in learning about the character development and worldbuilding of this series, how magic works in this world, I find it all very interesting, not just the sexual part. This proves how interesting everything is being done, it makes me think about how things will be in five chapters, for example, and not just in the next one. Anyway, I really like everything I'm reading.
1/20/24, 4:55 AM
Didn't expect to see the next leg of the story so soon, but enjoyed seeing the relationship between Jake and Simon grow further. Like @Fred W. Kong said, the balance between the erotic and romantic parts of this story is really enjoyable and makes the whole story enjoyable. I am really looking forward to seeing how the Neurolink will change the dynamic between Jake and SImon as well as how Jake's friends will be brought into the mix. This sotry has me thinking about the D/s relationship and how the emotional side of the master/slave realtionship can interact.
Anonymous
1/20/24, 1:44 AM
Please continue this.
1/19/24, 10:48 PM
You could have saved this concept and sold it to an erotica publisher. Like, conventional publishing. They do plenty of mc. (I mean this as possibly one of the greatest compliments I can give) You do an incredible job of balancing the erotic and romantic elements of this story. Even when sex isn't happening, I'm enjoying the characters and how they move around each other. Listening to Jake's internal monologue really adds a ton to the sex scenes, and his introduction to D/s and kink play feels very, very realistic. This story is already one of the greats, Simon and Jake are going to be living in my head for a long time coming.
1/19/24, 5:53 PM
Very very hot, sexy, just great. Lovely plot and set up and romance and porn. Very good story. The tech reveal was nifty. Loved that.
Anonymous
1/19/24, 7:59 AM
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Gay Harem
1/19/24, 8:53 AM
@Anonymous Rewards for you! :grin: