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1/29/24, 5:47 PM
Aww i feel bad for Jared. I mean im happy that Daniel is now part of the pact but all the drama he brought wirh him is not fun. He is stirring emotions and soon bringing danger. Looking forward for an update again.

Anonymous
1/30/24, 4:19 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thanks a lot! Yeah, it's a bit difficult (It was difficult to write as well) but I promise it will all work out at the end.
1/30/24, 4:14 AM
Great finale! You're right in your comment to Martin: this ending is pretty clearly signposted, but no less hot for it! The fact that all the jockboys end up being a hivemind at the end is very sexy, and you do a great job showing them absorb Jake's personality during the orgy scene. Too bad I don't know any hot nerds who can mindfuck me into submission.
1/30/24, 2:22 AM
The ending was even better than I dreamed. Glad the time zones allowed this to appear Monday night instead of Tuesday. Yay! And why isn’t this in the running for Mad Science?

1/30/24, 3:34 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I thought about putting this in mad science, but really only the last chapter fits with the contest, imho. And I started posting the story before the contest started. I don’t think you can put a later chapter of a story in a contest, since it wouldn’t be fair for the anonymous judging. Think of this as your Mad Science appetizer before the contest. 😃

1/30/24, 4:04 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Yeah, I get it. But this is one hell of an appetizer ! Just about the best series I’ve read here in a long time.
1/30/24, 3:17 AM
Another great addition to the JPS Universe, Charlie! Insanely hot while still carrying a fun vibe, very well done!
EJG
1/29/24, 1:41 PM
Damn, this was one of the hottest stories i've read in a long while,even with the str8 sex all element. I am a sucker for CNC,bad boys and dominant bullies, and it's just about damned time we get a BIG TOP/small sub rather than the token sbig sub tags i tend to see. Claudio seemed to even have a hypnotic aura about his dominance,even though it was not a hypno theme. Ya got me privately fantasizing about Claudio inviting his boys round to 'spear the queer' or even the other scenario's with other dom jocks poor Dylan found himself in

1/30/24, 1:04 AM
@[EJG](/user/show/1050471) Thank you for the kind words! I love to walk the line between reality/supernatural in my stories, so the reader themself can make their own conclusions of whether or not it was Claudio's mere presence that did Dylan in, or there was something more in the works. > Ya got me privately fantasizing about Claudio inviting his boys round to ‘spear the queer’ or even the other scenario’s with other dom jocks poor Dylan found himself in Oh, believe me, you are _not_ alone! :wink:
1/30/24, 12:37 AM
This was truly incredible.
1/29/24, 5:52 PM
Fuck, what a story!!!
1/29/24, 12:50 PM
OhBOY OhBOY... I did not want that chapter to end. What a FUN way that you described their intimacy. it was incredibly hot. Do you think that Brian and Kyle are making incredible sex smells when they cum so much and all over each other? I bet Brian smells like a man meets sex... so good. THANK YOU
Martin
1/29/24, 5:47 AM
Honestly, this series deserves so much more attention, especially from people into real effective hypnosis and total mindlessness. I can't fathom why it gets so little attention. Maybe it's missing some vital tags...

1/29/24, 9:26 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I wish I knew too. I'm trying my best 😅 What do you mean by vital tags?
1/29/24, 3:39 AM
This is the bully story we all needed! So refreshing to get some hot CNC like this, even if it’s not the best-negotiated CNC in the world, lol. The humiliation, degradation, and sadism were scorching hot, and it was very fun learning more and more about what their relationship in high school really was… What an amazing standalone! I love your work and won’t stop loving it.

1/29/24, 5:02 AM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) As always Soren, your words and advise are more than appreciated and taken to heart. I had a lot of fun with this one and kinda let my fantasies run amok, so I'm glad to hear you and hopefully others will enjoy it! Can't wait to see what's next up your sleeve!