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1/30/24, 12:30 AM
Oh my oh my oh my oh my!! Gdhdndhrfdg Do fucking good! Everything about this was amazing! So good! Great plot, great porn, great sex, great end. So good! So sexy.

Martin
1/30/24, 6:13 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I hear you. This is one amazingly hot and cum-inducing story, well written, great concept, and prefect execution!
1/30/24, 2:42 AM
@Martin, I guess you mean January 30 in European time because it's January 29 in the States and I just finished reading this leg of the story. I like this ending. It's not an overwhelming change in Dan and Taylor; it's more Inception style without the whole depression. And all three being Simon's jockboys just comes gradually. It's really nice to see a story where the mind control doesn't dominate but comes on gradually and there is an acceptance of the control. And you left room for the story to go in different directions. Thank you for writing this story.

Martin
1/30/24, 6:12 AM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) The intricacies of time zones :) The system always shows a timestamp adjusted for your local time zone. So I'm always talking MET :)
1/30/24, 4:56 AM
4 stars
1/29/24, 1:18 PM
I went back and re read this recently. Such a great series!

Anonymous
1/30/24, 4:20 AM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) Thank you so much!
1/29/24, 5:47 PM
Aww i feel bad for Jared. I mean im happy that Daniel is now part of the pact but all the drama he brought wirh him is not fun. He is stirring emotions and soon bringing danger. Looking forward for an update again.

Anonymous
1/30/24, 4:19 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thanks a lot! Yeah, it's a bit difficult (It was difficult to write as well) but I promise it will all work out at the end.
1/30/24, 4:14 AM
Great finale! You're right in your comment to Martin: this ending is pretty clearly signposted, but no less hot for it! The fact that all the jockboys end up being a hivemind at the end is very sexy, and you do a great job showing them absorb Jake's personality during the orgy scene. Too bad I don't know any hot nerds who can mindfuck me into submission.
1/30/24, 2:22 AM
The ending was even better than I dreamed. Glad the time zones allowed this to appear Monday night instead of Tuesday. Yay! And why isn’t this in the running for Mad Science?

1/30/24, 3:34 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I thought about putting this in mad science, but really only the last chapter fits with the contest, imho. And I started posting the story before the contest started. I don’t think you can put a later chapter of a story in a contest, since it wouldn’t be fair for the anonymous judging. Think of this as your Mad Science appetizer before the contest. 😃

1/30/24, 4:04 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Yeah, I get it. But this is one hell of an appetizer ! Just about the best series I’ve read here in a long time.
1/30/24, 3:17 AM
Another great addition to the JPS Universe, Charlie! Insanely hot while still carrying a fun vibe, very well done!
EJG
1/29/24, 1:41 PM
Damn, this was one of the hottest stories i've read in a long while,even with the str8 sex all element. I am a sucker for CNC,bad boys and dominant bullies, and it's just about damned time we get a BIG TOP/small sub rather than the token sbig sub tags i tend to see. Claudio seemed to even have a hypnotic aura about his dominance,even though it was not a hypno theme. Ya got me privately fantasizing about Claudio inviting his boys round to 'spear the queer' or even the other scenario's with other dom jocks poor Dylan found himself in

1/30/24, 1:04 AM
@[EJG](/user/show/1050471) Thank you for the kind words! I love to walk the line between reality/supernatural in my stories, so the reader themself can make their own conclusions of whether or not it was Claudio's mere presence that did Dylan in, or there was something more in the works. > Ya got me privately fantasizing about Claudio inviting his boys round to ‘spear the queer’ or even the other scenario’s with other dom jocks poor Dylan found himself in Oh, believe me, you are _not_ alone! :wink:
1/30/24, 12:37 AM
This was truly incredible.