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3/5/24, 11:28 PM
This is so wonderful. Can’t wait for more

3/9/24, 5:24 PM
@[TheWalkingAlive](/user/show/925088) Thank you so much!
3/9/24, 1:14 PM
Ethan is definitely 10/10. Can’t wait to read more!
3/9/24, 1:34 AM
Holy shit! This captures the mad science challenge concept so well! And the transformations were incredibly hot too! Great story! I love how it kinda has a happy ending too!
3/9/24, 12:24 AM
i won't lie, the very opening line of this immediately turned me off. "It was a dark and stormy night because of course it was. This is a vaguely ~~horror themed Halloween~~ science themed competition erotic mind control story, what other kind of night was it going to take place on?" a little humor is fine in erotic stories but the narrator undercutting the entire premise from the very start, and a hackneyed old dark and stormy night joke too? did not give me high hopes for the rest.
3/8/24, 11:50 PM
I would love to read more from you! Especially more father son love stuff.
3/8/24, 5:26 PM
so beautiful. the intimacy is just heaven-sent. WELL WRITTEN work. THANK YOU
3/8/24, 6:32 AM
Great story!
3/8/24, 4:28 AM
OMG i love this chapter. So hot. And i love that Brad is such a hungry hungry slut bottom. I hope this is not the last time we see Ethan. Maybe we could add his boyfriend and make it a threesome. Anyway, looking forward the next chapter.
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3/8/24, 12:58 AM
Very well written story. 10/10. Eager for more!!