Recent Comments

3/29/24, 4:54 PM
I tend to be a bit romantic so I like a happy or sweet ending. But that also depends on your definition of dark. Either way this story is my new favorite. Hope we have some chapters to go before the conclusion.

3/29/24, 10:41 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) 2 more chapters until the branching finale (so 4 more chapters to read: 6, 7, and 8a/8b). The real question is: Do I post 8a and 8b on the same day? Or space them out?

3/30/24, 3:33 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I think I’ve written and deleted my reply about four times already. I can’t come up with an answer. Maybe if you planned two endings all along then both at once? Otherwise go with your original ending first? Gaaaa!
3/29/24, 9:09 PM
This is funny and hot and so well written! Thank you for sharing this here <3
3/29/24, 3:54 PM
This is great will it continue i really want to see what happens to them
Anonymous
3/27/24, 10:20 PM
Man, that training dildo really fucked Brad in more ways than one, huh This is such a great series and I eagerly await each chapter. You have the perfect blend of hot scenes and great plot! Really want to see where this ends. Do you know or will the characters surprise even you, Naedre?

3/28/24, 12:03 AM
@Anonymous The endings are written and being edited. There is a sweet ending and a dark ending I planned from the beginning. The characters did surprise me a bit, especially in the dark ending. It’s still dark, but I expected someone to end up being evil when they were just human. Only human, yet all the dark stuff happened anyway. I don’t know if that makes it more or less dark.

3/29/24, 3:25 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I'm personally more excited for the bad ending lol. Thanks for another great chapter!
3/29/24, 2:47 PM
Great story u can go anywhere with it, turn them in sex objects
Anonymous
3/29/24, 10:52 AM
I guess the author has given up and abandoned this story. It's a shame, really.
11/16/20, 8:41 PM
> They were all dressed in comfortable travel-wear, but the brunette was wearing a fleece onesie that had animal ears on the hood – he looked like that kid from the “Wild Things” book except grown up and muscular. He looked maybe like a wrestler. That was *way* too specific. Is there an image that inspired this, and if so, can I please have it? > “Stop!” Snake yelled. “Arrêtez!” If my French is right, and it usually isn't, you used the formal 'you' conjugation here, while Rugby Boy addresses Snake with the informal. I suspect it's just that you used Google Translate for this, but did you make Snake bad at his conjugations on purpose? (Or does someone who speaks better French want to fill me in?) > I confess a certain weakness for French-Canadian men, that dark-haired, creamy skin thing just kills me. I find them sexy as all get-out. I went to college in Quebec. This is basically why.

3/29/24, 3:17 AM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Rereading this story and came across your post. The image of the onsie reminds me of [Rick and Griff](https://www.twokingsunlimited.com/product/preorder-only-two-kings-unlimited-thk-brand-dark-grey-hooded-onesie/).

3/29/24, 5:22 AM
Thanks for the share @[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223). Hot AF.
3/29/24, 4:30 AM
❤️❤️🖤🖤❤️❤️
PupBama
3/29/24, 4:24 AM
Keep going! While a familiar trope, these series are always great!!
3/28/24, 6:13 PM
Campus magnum? Idk what that’s about but I would love to see more & where the cards will come & take them maybe it might even interest me to try my own story….who knows. Wanna c it through though