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Sss
4/3/24, 11:24 PM
I hope Brad can find himself.
Steve
4/3/24, 7:49 PM
Great story bro.
4/3/24, 7:22 PM
My boy Tony. Just the way I like it 🤣
4/3/24, 6:03 PM
Besides the fact that this story and your writing is superb, I love how Brad keeps spiraling down this rabbit hole of total slutdom. Now what this new Drake will add is most exciting. Can’t wait for the next part.
4/3/24, 4:05 PM
Oh. So I was hoping he would be the top of his now two boys. Oh well. Interesting setup though.
4/3/24, 3:14 AM
I like how this is a community story but nobody is adding to it.
4/2/24, 9:27 PM
What a fucking amazing story. The scene how Brad totally surrenders to his new craving being a slut is simply priceless. Thank you so much for the perfect time I had reading this chapter!
4/1/24, 6:52 PM
Great work. Loving this series.
3/30/24, 10:27 AM
Hey dude, this is a nice story, but the amount of basic spelling and grammar mistakes that popped up on the first page.. kinda showed that while you might be passionate about this, there's a lack of attention to detail. That makes the story feel like a rushed out the door, never looked at again draft rather than a sexy work of erotic fiction. And when authors don't do basic checks, it lessens the impact of the writing, takes away the passion and main point of the writing. None of this is meant to be discouraging: run this through a spell checker just once and there's a bunch of small, easily corrected mistakes. Incredibly useful tools are available to all authors, especially if English is not the authors native language. > masterbaiting while smelling his underwear masturbating > feeling ashaed ashamed > stoping his feet on the ground in anger. stomping > Moreover, if that wasn’t enough embarrassing, embarrassing enough > Not only you like to smell Not only do you

Hey
4/1/24, 3:37 PM
Thank you, I have revised a lot of the mistakes, and i have made some minor changes for better experience. They will be available within 48 hrs after my edit is allowed to proceed. Please read once more and share any other ideas i can use for my future work. @[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878)
Hey
4/1/24, 3:36 PM
Hello, Author here.Thank you for reading this and please excuse some of my mistake as I’m still new to writing and English isn’t my first language. (I have revised a lot of them, if you find anymore please leave a comment) Im hoping to continue this with 2 or more stories (one about divulging into the past when they first met). Please suggest some kinks/fetishes that you would like them to do. That’s it, peace out