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3/13/24, 5:47 AM
Oh hell yes
3/13/24, 3:14 AM
Me gustaría saber la opinión de lo que piensan de la historia, algo que les quedará de incógnita, que les gusto más, cual culo les pareció que disfruto más, cual trasero o traseros les gustaría probar... o lo que quieran opinar. Estaré contestando los comentarios, sino desean que les responda (lo cual es comprensible dependiendo de la persona y sus gustos) solo deben poner un "*" al final del comentario. Gracias siempre. :writing_hand: :penguin:
3/12/24, 6:35 PM
Thanks, Kyle, for a super hot Master/slave story. Unlike Amul, I think there is enough indication of Mark's and Alex's deep natural connection for me to see romance in the story. I found it particularly hot that Alex had in fact been Mark's mysterious weekend slave for the previous 2 years. Also that Mark arranged to have not only a slave husband but also a live-in slave. I hope it develops into a threesome+ polyamorous M/s family! The only adverse comments from me are the apparently not so consensual coerced straight-to-gay transformation, and the insufficient detail of the mind training and control process. Admittedly my comments reflect more my personal fetishes and preferences than any real flaws in the story. Still I am constantly disappointed with how many authors seem to think that a straight-to-gay transformation makes a transformation story hot. What's wrong with transforming a reticent gay man into the BDSM/slave lifestyle? Regarding the mind control/training, I am an avid subject of hypnosis recordings. Unless I am a poor subject and incapable of seriously deep hypnosis, I find it takes months and months of audio training to have much affect at all. I have yet (as far as I know!) been induced to forget anything very significant through the hypnosis. Because I enjoy hypnosis so much I want to learn more about how it can really be used to make mind control more effective, and what other elements exist for mind control. It would be fantastic (though admittedly rather unreasonable) to find at least a touch of this realistic detailed information in a fictional story.
3/12/24, 1:47 PM
Bienvenidos a la zona de comentarios, espero hayas disfrutado de esta historia algo larga... en todo caso, las nalgas de Oliver en esta ocasión estarán "sujetando" cada comentario que coloques. :peach:
3/12/24, 7:24 AM
This is great.
3/11/24, 11:25 PM
Looking forward to part 3.
Anonymous
3/11/24, 8:24 PM
Awesome can't wait for the next chapter ....🥰🥰
3/9/24, 7:10 PM
Yes, it is a great story. I hope there is more to come.

3/11/24, 3:00 PM
@[Mailman2020!](/user/show/938360) Just posted Chapter 5
3/9/24, 3:06 PM
This story is so cute and hot. I hope it never ends.

3/11/24, 3:00 PM
@[TheWalkingAlive](/user/show/925088) It was written with five chapters in mind, but Wart and Thwollow haven't fully relinquished me yet, so we'll see.
Anonymous
3/11/24, 3:45 AM
this was soooooo hot omg