Ow. This ending hurt. It was also quite hot at parts, a testament to good writing. Will be revisiting this story a lot

This is the first ending i read and im guessing this is the bad choice ending. I mean its alright that Brad stayed gay but its only for Kal though. I guess this is the good ending for Kal, he can become a straight warlock so that he could have a child. And i still hate Drake, too bad Brad removed the turned on torture curse. He should have it even after Kal made him go away. He needs to suffer and not to use his gigantic magical schlong. I might wait a bit before i read ending two. I need to digest this a little bit. But all i can say this is a nice tragic ending for Brad.

I think I prefer this ending, but both of them were hot. Thank you for this story

Great story I hope you come back to the bar and characters

I love that the store owner is just like (quietly) "what the fuck, what the fuck, what the fuuuuuuuck"

This was great. I like how you kept it simple all throughout. I appreciate stories that go exactly where you expect them to go. Good job!

I love the story about father and son in relationships very much. I hope you can write more about it. Changing the age and body is also good.

What a pity! This series don't move forward. Easily one of my favorites from recent years. I hope Iriefall returns this series someday.

Oh my freaking goodness, this is so freaking good!!!! CHOICES MAKE A MAN! And the mistakes influence those choices, sometimes unexpectedly. ❤️🖤❤️🖤❤️🖤

Dude this was one of the best stories I've read on the site as someone who loves hypermasculinity, jocks, and muscle. Excellent writing, great and individualized characters, and VERY sexy. All the characters are really fun and likeable. I really liked Chase's growth with his bicuriosity, and his relationship with Oliver is really well developed and natural. Benito being that cocky stud on campus who annoys you but you always fantasize about. Eric was really sexy and I liked his bluntness and his banter with Benito. I also found Richard to be a very amusing character, he reminded me of Prince Wu from the Legend of Korra. Chase and Oliver's talk and kiss in the sauna- so sexy and natural. Eric and Patrick sucking Benito's cock was hot especially as it was their first time doing something with another guy. Eric and Benito fucking Patrick was also amazing. The BEST scene is the locker room orgy before the big game. So fucking beautiful. The tension building up as Chase calls Oliver over and begins sucking him as everyone watches. Eric fucking Benito. Chase licking Oliver's musky pits as he fucks him. I nutted when all the football jocks nutted on Chase and covered him in sperm. Fuck man. I'm not sure if the loophole to coach's rule was supposed to be obvious to the reader, since I assumed his rule said "girlfriend" to generally mean partner, so Chase revealing the orgy inducing loophole did surprise me and get my heart pumping. I also really enjoyed Eric and Benito as Asian and Latino characters, both had unique traits and were important to the story. Many authors (white) really don't know how to write poc's without disrespecting them in one way or another so it was really nice to see. I liked that Eric was the more masculine and assertive one in his relationship. Since Chase's ethnicity was never imagined, I envision him as this tall beefy stud from my gym who to me looks Latino (and who I think definitely looks like a football player). If I had some suggestions, I would like more emphasis on pecs! More pecs, more armpits. The story mentioned musk and sweat a lot which was good though. Overall one of the best stories here. PLEASE, consider making a sequel. I really want to see how Chase and Oliver's relationship grows.