Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/17/24, 3:27 AM
Great installment! like always, how you create characters and show us their inner machinations is phenomenal. Loving how the gears in Monty’s mind are slowly moving lol
3/12/24, 9:59 PM
This was a fun ride! Only advice I’d give you is to make sure you split paragraphs up when a different person talks. Dialogue can get confusing when everything‘s in the same paragraph.

3/16/24, 8:50 PM
@[Hargoni](/user/show/912212) Thank you a lot for a good tip. This story will definitely continue and I will pay attention to your advice.
3/16/24, 4:47 PM
You manage to continue to create new twists to this ongoing story....Keep it intense & twisted!
Oct 31, 2023
Papaya
3/16/24, 10:37 AM
I was half-expecting Theo to turn out to be a siren or a merman! But such a sweet story! Enjoyed it very much. ❤️
Anonymous
3/16/24, 9:43 AM
Very hot story. Hoping Juan gets to see more of the island or even the hotel staff 😉
3/16/24, 8:46 AM
Seriously Charlie such good fucking work here. Damn
3/16/24, 4:40 AM
Awww I hope Monty gets a cuddle soon T-T maybe later when he hasn't been an ass lol
Anon
3/13/24, 8:57 PM
I am loving this story! The slow corruption of Brad is delicious to watch. Would love to see how Kal is getting on in Brad's aggro body

3/14/24, 3:07 PM
@Anon No spoilers, but you might enjoy next chapter, set to publish next week :)

Anonymous
3/15/24, 9:32 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Next week??! Nooo, we wants it now!
3/15/24, 7:07 PM
Fucking hot as always, eager to see what comes next!