Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/17/24, 1:14 PM
Bravo!
3/17/24, 5:35 AM
Your stories always manage to put a big smile on my face, Charlie! Capable of both being entertaining and incredibly hot! Your casual style of writing is really delivering in droves here, keep up the amazing work and keep those big booties coming! :wink:
Anonymous
3/17/24, 3:27 AM
Great installment! like always, how you create characters and show us their inner machinations is phenomenal. Loving how the gears in Monty’s mind are slowly moving lol
3/12/24, 9:59 PM
This was a fun ride! Only advice I’d give you is to make sure you split paragraphs up when a different person talks. Dialogue can get confusing when everything‘s in the same paragraph.

3/16/24, 8:50 PM
@[Hargoni](/user/show/912212) Thank you a lot for a good tip. This story will definitely continue and I will pay attention to your advice.
3/16/24, 4:47 PM
You manage to continue to create new twists to this ongoing story....Keep it intense & twisted!
Oct 31, 2023
Papaya
3/16/24, 10:37 AM
I was half-expecting Theo to turn out to be a siren or a merman! But such a sweet story! Enjoyed it very much. ❤️
Anonymous
3/16/24, 9:43 AM
Very hot story. Hoping Juan gets to see more of the island or even the hotel staff 😉
3/16/24, 8:46 AM
Seriously Charlie such good fucking work here. Damn
3/16/24, 4:40 AM
Awww I hope Monty gets a cuddle soon T-T maybe later when he hasn't been an ass lol