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3/17/24, 10:35 PM
Great writing. Really dig the hard science. Later chapters were harder to wank to as the scientific method is definitely not sexy - but really helped edge along the story!
3/17/24, 4:07 PM
This was such a beautiful and bittersweet story, delving so deeply into love, attachment and the difficulty of letting go. The ending was truly beautiful. I think fiction can often have a toxic attitude to love and attachment which bleeds into posession, where the idea of never loving again after your first love is put on a pedastal. So I enjoyed that Mike could have a full life loving Ari and Xander, with neither love diminishing the other.
3/17/24, 3:54 PM
Liked how you brought back the classic Gunnar character from previous classic Superman stories. Especially enjoyed when Gunnar & Jason worked together to bring Lex into the mix on facefuck blowjob with Supes! Also, enjoyed the comic twist at the end with Jason-- can't wait to see how Lex gets himself out of this jam!
Anonymous
3/17/24, 1:14 PM
Bravo!
3/17/24, 5:35 AM
Your stories always manage to put a big smile on my face, Charlie! Capable of both being entertaining and incredibly hot! Your casual style of writing is really delivering in droves here, keep up the amazing work and keep those big booties coming! :wink:
Anonymous
3/17/24, 3:27 AM
Great installment! like always, how you create characters and show us their inner machinations is phenomenal. Loving how the gears in Monty’s mind are slowly moving lol
3/12/24, 9:59 PM
This was a fun ride! Only advice I’d give you is to make sure you split paragraphs up when a different person talks. Dialogue can get confusing when everything‘s in the same paragraph.

3/16/24, 8:50 PM
@[Hargoni](/user/show/912212) Thank you a lot for a good tip. This story will definitely continue and I will pay attention to your advice.
3/16/24, 4:47 PM
You manage to continue to create new twists to this ongoing story....Keep it intense & twisted!
Oct 31, 2023
Papaya
3/16/24, 10:37 AM
I was half-expecting Theo to turn out to be a siren or a merman! But such a sweet story! Enjoyed it very much. ❤️
Anonymous
3/16/24, 9:43 AM
Very hot story. Hoping Juan gets to see more of the island or even the hotel staff 😉